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Picture of skyofautumn
Registered: April 28, 2005
Posts: 24
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So many things go unsaid between you and I
We leave it to the silence of the moment
We could never put what we feel into words
Why try, there are no words to describe the emotion going through me
Night after night we stare up at the stars together
It has been said that you know when you love someone when you can stare into each others eyes forever
I am happy to say that is true
We stand there in the dark
You hold me in your arms
I whisper in your ear, “promise you will never let me go”
In return you gently say, “I promise”
We both breathe in the cold crisp air
I never want the night to end
And suddenly I wake up
Pulled from the happiness of my dream
Forced back into reality
It was just a dream
It was just a dream
I am left alone, in the dark
The darkness is so much more comforting when you have someone to share it with
I hate the waiting
Waiting for the night to fall
Waiting to join you again


Just promise me, that you'll try to breathe.
Picture of iamastar
Registered: June 22, 2004
Posts: 2343
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Cold gray-tinted light cascades into a reclusive, half abandoned room like a waterfall tryting to wash away all of its restrants,
Its final destination falls upon an ominescant, emotionless face.
Staring out onto a non-existant horizon, face and body are numed by the essence of life.
The fire that once murned in the depths of the soul and in every fiber of the being,
Has now slowly begun to creep its way out, leavingits hosts mangled body gullable to any prey imaginable,
Self-consiously withdrawaling inward only soothes and toughens the exterior,
Leaving little protection against the corruption that begins to destroy the inner mentality to face the outside world.
Unrequitted love is hwat carried her into this pain filled misery,
Self-destructivec acts leave cut marks sliced into the flesh of her limbs,
Which only goes to show that her heart couldn't take the rath of pain,
This, her life sentence, she can never escape from.
So, one by one, down the hole does each pill go,
As each second ticks by, anticipation is now over taken by a shadow,
A shadow called Death.


I have not yet reached my goal, and I am not perfect. But Christ has taken hold of me. So I keep on running and struggling to take hold of the prize. My friends, I don't feel that I have already arrived. But I forget what is behind, and I struggle for wha
Picture of tinkerbellroxx
Registered: March 25, 2005
Posts: 17
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That is much better than i could, like, EVER write!!!!!!!! i wish i could write like that!

EXCELLENT!!! -Mike Myers(Wayne's World)
Picture of iamastar
Registered: June 22, 2004
Posts: 2343
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Awww, that was sweet. It is better than any piece of work that I could right. Keep up the good work.


I have not yet reached my goal, and I am not perfect. But Christ has taken hold of me. So I keep on running and struggling to take hold of the prize. My friends, I don't feel that I have already arrived. But I forget what is behind, and I struggle for wha
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