
Registered: July 04, 2006
Posts: 15
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My friend and I are writing a short story. Any advice would be nice.
YOUR NOT FROM BROOKLYN!!!!!---some random kid in a chatroom
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Registered: March 16, 2007
Posts: 16
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Sadly, all the weight could have helped him stand straight.
Sincere fella
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Registered: July 12, 2006
Posts: 364
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Start the book with " Jerry was a man with big thoughts and big ideas. Sadly the weight of them crushed his bones. His funeral was sad and people cried and then everyone forgot about him."
-yah
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Registered: June 19, 2006
Posts: 22
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I would love to help. But I need to get more information. What kind of book is it? What is the goal of your story? Will it convey a message? Will it be poetic, philosophical, narrative, etc...?
Existence is an art.
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Registered: January 22, 2005
Posts: 716
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What kind of short story? Who is the protagonist? What do they do? Why? Who against?
Only simple and quiet words will ripen of themselves. For a whirlwind does not last a whole morning, nor does a sudden shower last the entire day.
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