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Picture of depressedwavemaster
Registered: June 09, 2003
Posts: 5084
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I never really liked Christmas.... I'd say I have seasonal depression, but not really; it's just more intense this time of year.


Black Disgrace

Don't let me near Christmas,
I know I won't survive
For if I smell
The sweet sweet pine,
I'll die of suicide
Don't wish me Happy Yultide,
Don't give me Christmas gift
If I hear the silver bells,
My spirits, it won't lift
Don't show me that White Christmas,
Don't make me sing your songs
If I hear one tune of joy,
I'm sure it wouldn't be long
Don't give me frigid weather,
And forests of mighty green,
For my mind will cloud with memories,
That never should have been
Don't let me see the Solstice,
Don't take me near Yule-night Ball
For my resolution won't be pretty;
I won't be standing tall
Don't let Christmas find me,
Flaky feathers on my face,
For if I see that silent tree,
I'll die in black disgrace


None of us can ever be free while others are still in chains. -Leslie Feinberg
Picture of depressedwavemaster
Registered: June 09, 2003
Posts: 5084
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It refers to spirit, not a Sprit Form, but the additude of a person.


None of us can ever be free while others are still in chains. -Leslie Feinberg
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Registered: May 19, 2004
Posts: 2013
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In line 9, the "it" should be changed to "they," so that it agrees with "spirits." Other than that, it was pretty solid gramatically. The poem kept my attention, too.


Tennis balls are green, not yellow.
Picture of crzyme19
Registered: July 26, 2003
Posts: 5005
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Oh, DWM. Smile


What if what you think is great, really is great, but it's not as great as something greater?
Picture of Karategirl28
Registered: February 18, 2004
Posts: 3177
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anti-christmas YEAH! lol i likes.


Hope for the best and expect the worst............take whatever life throws at you...
Picture of Ikki14Reed
Registered: August 17, 2001
Posts: 5811
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Irony... Awesome.


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Registered: June 22, 2004
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That was oddly good.


I have not yet reached my goal, and I am not perfect. But Christ has taken hold of me. So I keep on running and struggling to take hold of the prize. My friends, I don't feel that I have already arrived. But I forget what is behind, and I struggle for wha
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