Engulfed By lonlieness and sorrow.
Drowning in my own tears.
All alone, no one to save me.
no one to save me from my greatest adversary,
My warden, My captor, My attacker,
No one to Save me from myself.
Lost in my mind, engulfed by my empty shallow state. Digging my own Grave.
Rembering what can never be.
Alone.

That was honestly good. It was better than I expected.

Skippy, it honestly doesn't suck. Don't think like that.

I SWEAR I'M GONNA DESTROY MY COMPUTER FOR DOUBLING UP AND TELLING ME THERES AN ERROR BUT POSTING MY MESSAGE!DOES THIS EVER HAPPEN TO ANY OF YOU?

I kinda figured that it really blowed but I'm boerd and depressed. and when I'm like that I write poetry

yeah i kindafigured it did i was just boerd

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Yeah of course I did why does it suck?

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Why yes, yes it does.

Yeah, put "digging my own grave" alone on the next line. And also I don't know what you think of this, but when I write poems like that I usually write in all lowercase letters just to show inferiority, or the feeling of being small or meaningless.

I think the part 'Digging my own grave' should go on the next line. It just feels like it should.

Or it works on that line to. I think it all just depends on when you read it.

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Originally posted by VeRtiCaLxLiMiT:
Did you write that?

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Yeah of course I did why does it suck?

Did you write that?