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Registered: January 28, 2005
Posts: 34
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You never recognize me you always Tell me to fo away but when i'm off Work you always want to play I can't do that you don't even say hi During the day i'm not a doormat Or even a booty call i'm a person With feelings you tell me i'm beautiful And how i loook wonderful i love when you Say that so do you don't get me Wrong i like you you to a lot more than What you think i always did maybe It's just a lie or a myth you probably Don't like me you just playing with My head just look at what you did You really hurt me everyday and Night really deep inside I hope you read really slow And how you hurt my soul.
~*Natasia~*
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Registered: January 28, 2005
Posts: 34
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Hey thanks guys for loving my poem and i really want to say thanks to Jamaica17 and Gabibff but if you want me to i will put more up and send some to you but thanks alot
~*Natasia~*
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Registered: November 30, 2003
Posts: 972
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Damn, that was depressing. It wasn't a bad poem, but it was sad.
"Liberalism is a mental disorder, Republicanism isn't too far behind." - Michael Savage
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Registered: November 30, 2004
Posts: 4514
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It's not that you don't like it. It's the way you said that you don't like it. Her NN may be loser but there was no reason for you to imply that she really is a loser. You could have simply stated that you didn't like it. No need for the further rude remarks.
"I Dream away everyday, Try so hard to disregard The rhythm of t he rain that drops, And coincides with the beating of my heart"
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Registered: June 06, 2004
Posts: 3373
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How is not liking a poem narcisistic? Honorablecoalition.tripod.com Whereas;This message has hereby been proudly deemed racism and bigotry free by the Great and Honorable Coalition Against Racism. MMIV - Youthnoise's First Coalition.
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Registered: November 30, 2004
Posts: 4514
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You guys show now respect or concern for others feelings. Quit being so Narcisstic and try to be a bit more compassionate towards others for once.
"I Dream away everyday, Try so hard to disregard The rhythm of t he rain that drops, And coincides with the beating of my heart"
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Registered: June 06, 2004
Posts: 3373
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quote: Boring. Monotonous. Don't quit your day.. life.
I wanted to say that but thought it would be a little harsh. But now that the cats out of the bag: You truly embody your screenname. Honorablecoalition.tripod.com Whereas;This message has hereby been proudly deemed racism and bigotry free by the Great and Honorable Coalition Against Racism. MMIV - Youthnoise's First Coalition.
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Registered: June 28, 2003
Posts: 2745
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I love the poem.  and I do miss my own poems in my own poetry board that I made. |
Registered: November 30, 2004
Posts: 4514
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That was a compliment from Gem. Or a compliment compared to her insults. I honestly never once saw her say something nice so don't take that too offensively or personally.
"I Dream away everyday, Try so hard to disregard The rhythm of t he rain that drops, And coincides with the beating of my heart"
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Registered: August 17, 2001
Posts: 6970
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Boring. Monotonous. Don't quit your day.. life.
"We know how cruel the truth often is, and we wonder whether delusion is not more consoling"
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Registered: February 06, 2005
Posts: 77
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That is a really great poem and somehow you helped me a little and made me fill a little better about this guy that sounds like that Thanks! You aren't living if you don't take risks/chances
If you want to talk do it when I'm not turned around and u don't have a knife in your hand
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Registered: November 30, 2004
Posts: 4514
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Pack, everyone starts their own poetry thread, that way nobody will skip it or overlook it. And so it won't interfer with someone else's poetry. Loser, that is quite sad but very good. I liked it alot.
"I Dream away everyday, Try so hard to disregard The rhythm of t he rain that drops, And coincides with the beating of my heart"
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Registered: June 14, 2004
Posts: 134
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There is a poetry board for things like this. you don't need to start a new thread especially for such a deppressing poem as this.
"The dogmas of our quiet past are inadequate for the turbulent present" -Abraham Lincoln
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