
Registered: December 29, 2004
Posts: 39
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Tired I’m so tired of these chics tryna find out who I am b4 I noe who I am I’m tired of these *****, corny dudes to get any ol’ tric to suc his…. And oh my goodness Why is this teacher all up in my business ? This is ridiculous You’re supposed to be molding minds Not digging up all these rumors that’s nearly impossible to find And NO! I ‘m not PmS’in I’m just speaking the truth I’m just a normal black girl Just a part of the youth
The youth The Lies The Soul The fine smart guys that don’t exist and you wonder why I’m so Got dang pissed I’m so tired of this BS u feedin’ me “the Taurus and the Gemni were meant to be.” How about, “one Day you’ll find the right person even if the last one left you hurtin’ And always look to God for comfort Instead of heading for food at any sign of Alert I’m tired of these gangs hearing about the 21st century Klu Klux klan
I’m tired Of this alcohol abuse The two choices from which a grown hard working man has to choose from An addiction or a loving family
I’m tired of these world We livin’ in Givin’ in Tryna keep our head up in . I’m Tired I’m Tired So Tired
Eye of the universe My Molder My father
Please halp all my sistas and brothas My moms my dad Lord, Protect me, and this only life I’ll ever have Let Shasha know Darell is looking down on her right now Let her noe to always carry a s mile and a memory Never a hurt nor a frown Eye of the Universe My Molder My father Please let me believe, wisdom is what ill receive form being… So.. Tired….
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Registered: March 30, 2005
Posts: 3628
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Its good as a song. I'm assuming that's what you intended it to be. You might want to work on the rhythm in a couple of places, but overall I think its okay.
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