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Picture of BlueJean06
Registered: August 20, 2004
Posts: 91
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A poem from the darker side of my once bubbly spirit. ChelC
What's wrong?

something isn't right
darkness has become light
her footsteps softly wall
as she walks alone down a black hall
she's crying
no one knows the truth, she's always lying
Her mask is falling
do you hear her calling?
She's on her knees
begging for help, please
she needs You
someone that's true
she's always been good
acting like she always should
but lately she's been breaking down.
tryin' to figure out what's wrong with this town
lost lonely cold and afraid
looking the the grave she's laid
waiting for someone to push her in.
corrupted by her sin
no where to turn, no where to run
trying to turn from the knife, the pills...the gun
she swears she won't break down and cry
all she can do is try
the tears come hot and angry anyway
how long like this will she stay?
this can't be the ending she hoped for
There has got to be more
when will it end
only so far will she bend
she doesn't wanna be broken
be just someones token
needs to find reality
to know who she could be


Don't worry you're just as sane as I am!!
Picture of bella123
Registered: July 26, 2004
Posts: 2891
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cherry, i'm sorry, but it needs a little work..


Evitere Les Contrefacons.
Picture of chaos
Registered: December 09, 2002
Posts: 102
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that's really awesome! love it! read mine too
(everyone needs feedback so they can improve right?)


pourquoi te plains tu? tu es bien vivant non? moi je ne suis qu'en etre flottant dans l'air, sans ni sentiment ni souffrance, juste des particules en suspension.
Picture of cherrypie120
Registered: January 09, 2005
Posts: 3
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omg it rox my sox. how's this one

oh my god his face is like god
its so light and pretty and bubbly
i wish i was him, he's so lucky
he has a girl, and i want a guy
he is a guy, and i want a guy
until nevermore until peace to i part.

do u guyz like it? i did it in language artz
Picture of Ikki14Reed
Registered: August 17, 2001
Posts: 5811
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Hey, have you ever heard of Spoken Word?


Picture of biblebabe
Registered: December 14, 2004
Posts: 9
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WOW THAT IS SO GREAT I HOPE YOU EMTER THAT SOMEWHERE IT IS SO JUST IM WORDLESS ITS GREAT


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