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Picture of haitianlova
Registered: December 29, 2004
Posts: 39
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Tired
I’m so tired of these chics tryna find out who I am b4 I noe who I am
I’m tired of these *****, corny dudes to get any ol’ tric to suc his….
And oh my goodness
Why is this teacher all up in my business ?
This is ridiculous
You’re supposed to be molding minds
Not digging up all these rumors that’s nearly impossible to find
And NO! I ‘m not PmS’in
I’m just speaking the truth
I’m just a normal black girl
Just a part of the youth

The youth
The Lies
The Soul
The fine smart guys that don’t exist and you wonder why I’m so Got dang pissed
I’m so tired of this BS u feedin’ me
“the Taurus and the Gemni were meant to be.”
How about, “one Day you’ll find the right person
even if the last one left you hurtin’
And always look to God for comfort
Instead of heading for food at any sign of Alert
I’m tired
of these gangs hearing about the 21st century Klu Klux klan

I’m tired Of this alcohol abuse
The two choices from which a grown hard working man has to choose from
An addiction or a loving family

I’m tired of these world
We livin’ in
Givin’ in
Tryna keep our head up in
.
I’m Tired
I’m Tired
So Tired

Eye of the universe
My Molder
My father

Please halp all my sistas and brothas
My moms my dad
Lord, Protect me, and this only life I’ll ever have
Let Shasha know Darell is looking down on her right now
Let her noe to always carry a s mile and a memory
Never a hurt nor a frown
Eye of the Universe
My Molder
My father
Please let me believe, wisdom is what ill receive form being…
So..
Tired….
Picture of Greenleaf771
Registered: March 30, 2005
Posts: 3628
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Its good as a song. I'm assuming that's what you intended it to be. You might want to work on the rhythm in a couple of places, but overall I think its okay.


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