okay, so here's a poem i did last year( keep in mind, LAST year)

it was on the holocaust, extremeley depressing. here ya go.


Barbed Wire

Encircling its prisoners, defeating hope
Like an indestructible shield of evil
Sharp, ready to strike, willing to kill, torture, break dreams
Has no eyes, but sees everything beyond pain
Feels nothing, but everything.
And yet it is still a prisoner itself
Trapped, in barbed wire

well, anime, it IS kinda a board where you critique others. well, not really judge but you get my jist.

I liked it...but in truth no one has the right to judge others work...cause in truth it's what it means to you that makes it count...I would say that describes the emotion Hate. Or maybe jealously.

sorry, double post. just wondering, what it makes you think of. the poem.

Thanks, depressing though huh!

that is really good.

thanks, i'll hopefully post some more if you can bear it!

yeah... its good..

I'm for one not speachless. On a rating of 0 - 10 its about an 8.5

But seeing that you've done it last year, it's good.

Well done

hm...no reply, i guess that's a good sign. you guys are speechless!