Why does love have to hurt like this?,
I thought that what we had was a sweet heavenly bliss.
As I dream about what was once ours and what we had,
I realize that this foolish game called love is just a teenage fad.

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Originally posted by geminiangel521:
hardly one of my cohorts.

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—I second that. Just because we both view the other as full of shÎt... doesn't make us blood buddies. In fact the only connection you can scrounge up between us is the idea that neither of us haven't any hope for the rest of you finally learning how to "take a hint".

—Duty is as duty does, but there is no "stupidity" in teamwork.

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For, gem couldn't handle the job all by herself

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Pidity is hardly one of my cohorts.

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Maybe Geminiangel, if you had read the previous posts that I posted about this than you would have known that I wrote this poem over summer merely out of bordem.

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How would the circumstances of whether or not you were bored matter? If you generally wrote/write well, then you would/will still write well when you were/are bored or not.

Go back to the Special Olympics.

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Originally posted by iamastar:
didn't even write myself

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Picking it out as something somebody esle wrote doesn't get you off the hook, it just makes you sad for using something as your siggy that you don't even use to apply to yourself. It also makes you pathetic for not being able to come up with something original and unplagiarized.

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Originally posted by rootofevil:
marriage thread

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MARRIAGE thread? I HAVE been gone too long.

stupidity, welcome back. i hope you continue evermore to devistate the plague of noobies that have saturated this site with retardation. For, gem couldn't handle the job all by herself. consequently, the noobs have become both more numerous and annoying. oh, and btw, depressedwavemaster would like to marry you at the marriage thread

Thank you karategirl28.

I already commented, but it's still a good poem and i still like it.

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Or maybe, iamastar, your poem sucked. And, in reality, you simply cannot write, regardless of season

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Maybe Geminiangel, if you had read the previous posts that I posted about this than you would have known that I wrote this poem over summer merely out of bordem.

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What happens when the one boy you know is right for you is with the one girl you know is wrong for him?

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Stupidity, you probably didn't know this but that was my signature that you were commenting on. So, if you are going to have an opinion about someting that I didn't even write myself either keep it to yourself or go straight to the source.

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Originally posted by iamastar:
What happens when the one boy you know is right for you is with the one girl you know is wrong for him?

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The reality answer to that question is that whenever this happens, a little girl who thinks she deserves everything she wants and doesn't take into account what others want even though she claims to care about them puts herself up onto this pedestal of self-righteousness and dares to suck people into her suction whirlpool of demanded pity. It's quite a paradox really. No matter how much you try to inform them of how backward-minded their emotional thought process is.... they're still just plain oblivious. Damn drama queens of the new millenium, *sigh* and the last four years came so highly recommended too.

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Mabye, Stupidity, you need to get your head out of your a$$ before you are critical of everyone else.

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Or maybe, iamastar, your poem sucked. And, in reality, you simply cannot write, regardless of season.

But hey, you're the individual who solicited us to critique you; don't shoot the messenger.

Maybe it was a random poem that I wrote this summer that isn't really supposed to mean anything. Mabye, Stupidity, you need to get your head out of your a$$ before you are critical of everyone else.

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Go look up some words and leave me a message at 1-800-SPARE-ME. Some good ones are: clarity, meter, rhythm, theme, format, punctuation, style..... etc.

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In this scanty endeavor to supplement yourself with your own counsel, you fail to cite the veridical notions of brevity and concision of the literary capabilities that most of you nebbish schlimazels utterly discount. Rethink, regroup, and kill yourselves.

Is it just me or have veterans come back...i've never seen jookly before or even stupidity. So anyways, it needs a little work but pay no attention to stupidity. It just needs a little work, then it'll be great.

Oh god. I hope not EVERY dramatic teenage girl gets the idea that it's a good idea for them to purge their drivel into this noiseboard. Honey do you even know what poetry is? Tsk, tsk, tsk. Two forced couplets about your idiocy hardly qualifies and if I'm seriously the first to inform you of this.... it's much too late for you to be saved. Sure there are words in your crippled excuse for coherent communication, but do they mean anything? Does it matter that you wrote them down and shared them with a billion strangers who probably have their heads just as far up their own asse§ as you do? Just what is your deal? Go look up some words and leave me a message at 1-800-SPARE-ME. Some good ones are: clarity, meter, rhythm, theme, format, punctuation, style..... etc.

Thank you

i likes and i understand what youre saying.
good job!

Good good.

It was just a random poem I wrote this summer. But I will see how far I can take it.