I have a poem that I want to show yall,so please give me some feedback.

Life seemed so perfect when I met you,
when we looked into each others eyes we just knew.

The love we shared was once so cherished,
but now it has withered away and perished.

I never thought that day would come,
when you'd look at me and say I wasn't the one.

As you walked away I thought about the past three years,
and all I could remeber was all the tears.

I waited for you to walked back through the door,
but my heart is so empty i can't wait anymore.

I thought you would be there until the end,
but now I realize it is my own heart I have to mend.

People say good things happen to those who wait,
but for me I feel it is just too late.

Go here. Please?

i made it my self do yall like???