The Darkness Of Love

He holds her closer than any other
Closer than her dearest brother
He cries softly against her hair
Not wanting to realize the truth he cannot bear
A tear rolls down her face
As her heart begins to race
He won't let anything take her away
He whispers that she has to stay
She says that he knows,
That she will never really go
Love is something that you cannot change
Something you can't rearrange
Things grow dimmer by the hour
As she reminisces of her one true flower
She remembers the day he gave her a blood red rose
Then she knows
They were meant to be
Together till the world did cease
Suddenly her heart begins to pace
And he looks into her tear stained face
Her life begins to slip
His eyes have not stopped their drip
Her eyes begin to glaze
As her hands just lays
He know what has happened to her
Because her heart has yet to stir
Ice fills his heart
And becomes encased in a stone cold cart
Darkness covers as the night comes
but not from the night,
from the sorrow for a loved one
Watching her as she flows away,
his heart starts to break since he loved her so
as she loved him
This is the darkness of love
Because everything you have to lose is yet to come

That was nice, the idea ant everything.
However, I suggest you count the syllables more carefully when you write your next poem, as this one jumps out of rhythm sometimes.
Otherwise, it's good

Very good.

It was good. Every word of every line painted a picture in my head of what was going on. I give you props for that.

very good poem...i likes it
keep up the good work!

Laters~~~