"""Really, stupidity?"""

—Really, really. Though I'm still debating whether or not I'll unveil my true identity (since that's who I'm published as). The mystery played a big part in the legendary stupidity's fame. I'll see how things shape up around here first then re-weigh my options.



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You, klguddat.

Really, stupidity? That's pretty flipping awesome!

—How many YNer's would believe that in my YN absence I've since gotten an entrie book of my own original poetry actually published?



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Thanks Risk. Who's Dat?

Thanks.

Both great poems, Risk and Dat. I like your descriptions a lot, Risk.

I like it.

I gots another one:

Wonders~

The dust swirls around
I try, but don't make a sound
I can only wait as my life unfolds
Wait, as each story is told
He takes my life in his hands
Squeezes his fists and it falls like sand
I watch as he moves
So elegant and smooth
Instantly, 1,000 angels surround me
They tell me of all that is, and could be
I gaze in amazement
What has heaven sent?
Then they are gone
And I hear a sad song
A song of pain
Telling me there's nothing to gain
Then the story's done
And I know I have not won

I dunno if that's good or not, so...yeah. Let me know what ya think!

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But it irritates me.

If you look at it, it looks just as fine, 4 regular stanzas, 1 large stanza, and 4 regular stanzas. It is still symmetrical.

It won't let me edit that one stanza that ran together. It's pissing me off. But thanks.

Good poem, Risk.

Death's Massacre

In cold blood, she stabs you to death
Perhaps you are dreaming,
Perhaps it is death.
Can you see that spirit? Walking so murderous?
I cannot, for I am the murderess.
A mistress of evil, a psycho at heart;

If you knew how misery loves you,
You’d need it to survive.
Watch her commit murder, without a sound.
Wear the pain like a locket around your neck,
It will weigh you down,
It will choke you to death.

She was only three years to dead;
You took away her dream,
Of becoming all she seemed, her vengeance clear
Her adorning dream, was dead to you.
I saw you die, the news was good.
Death’s kiss was sealed, with lettering in red.

To kill all of you, I’ll want a wish
Take back my pain, my grin masochistic.
My sadistic ways, will they haunt your ways?
To take a nightmare, and make it real
A wish is a wish, a kill is a kill
Another time, another place.

Will fate find it’s everlasting place?
Perhaps I will die, perhaps I will kill
Though not real, I still feel.
As you died, I laughed in happiness.
I see the end coming, as a prophet myself.
Has the end come, or is it just a dream?
My weakness stills, my fears are real;
You are back from the dead, to avenge your kill.
Repeatedly stabbing me, I die slowly.
Breathing in the fumes of death, I mock your hidden weakness
You believe I am dead, but deep down inside.
I still haunt your nightmares, bringing you to death.

My blood runs deep, as cold as ice.
I still believe, that you are death.
Perhaps you are dancing, perhaps you are crying
But deep down in side, you are dying.
I was your love, your antagonist in hate.
You stole me away, from my frightful life.

A dream away, a dream up close,
A dream too far away, to believe in reality.
My reflection shows in the mirror,
It’s merely my spirit.
I see myself smiling like the devil,
I’ve killed my prey, hunted the weak.

I wasn’t a dream, for I was you.
You killed me inside, but I killed you first.
A mere drug, an intoxication;
I am nothing more than your reflection.
Up high on a hill, you will hang,
From a branch, God grew from lies.

As death kills you, I laugh sadistically.
I am not scared, I grin deliciously.
The cyanide is working, you’re dying quickly.
My spirit still walks, blood as tears.
My golden wings, grow darker by the minute.
I see my spirit, walking restlessly,
Perhaps it is darkness I seek.

okay here is one of my poems :

i've had never thought i'de lose you one day
i've had never thought of walking alone this way
if you leave me baby i could die
i don't wanna even say goodbye
i'll hold your hand i'll wipe your tears
i don’t want to miss your face my dear
Angels are falling all around me
shadows are all i can see
from the past ,i don't want you to be
I’ll be with you through sickness and health
until you take your last breath
guiding you to stay away from death
take your arm when the sky is blue
hold you when the stars are few
flowers are blooming so is our love
your my gift from up above
sun is burning ,so is my heart
from the thought that we will be apart
we're tripping over the words of our feelings
everything has lost his meaning
when you said that cancer you are beating
free_

Yeah Green, I get that a lot. Thank you.

Wow, Jenos. . .

That Day
The day that i left you,
Was the day,
That I realized what you meant to me.
I wanted you back,
You wouldn't come,
You said it was just,
"Puppy Love"
You said you didn't love me,
But I loved you,
I need you to help me through things.
You don't listen though.
My friends say I can do better.
I try to tell them,
And you why,
On that day I left,
But no one will listen.

Please tell me what you think of that!

He was God

Upon his hill so high, that little alcove,
laughing, coughing, and missing the point.
There he was - he always was, always will,
back it up he says, dead and restlessly.

He saved me once, yes, at that murderous lake,
sometimes that place, gets kind of empty.
He was looking for them - I just wish I knew,
what has been lost, forever his blind eyes search.

An abandoned dispatch, a platoon - bristling horrors,
old scratching branches on rusting recollections.
Stuffed inside that filthy hollowed shell,
a filling of sweet banality for the wicked.

Wise as they are, shaking heads - bumping shoulders,
cracking fingernails, poking holes in the dirt.
Smells invade my privacy, rotting thoughts,
garbage, gagging I cough and stumble.

Purity, an illusion for the weak, truth in lies,
the darkness of radiance draws me ever closer.
I smile, just almost within his feeble grasp,
an outstretched hand - brushing the rags of despair.

The dying exclamation uttered upon an ebbing breeze,
a shiver in the birth of time, a heartbeat.
Nobody is hurt, I promise to him with a bow,
teeth - an overexposure to cruelty and life.

The bottle did not help - the comfort of it gone,
so close to ruin, yet so far away from happiness.
He tried to leave, after all he had done for me,
do not take it away, one thing I believed in.

Trust my forbidden words - please, the burning coals,
far from the beginning, writhing in this cold misery.
So long ago I tried to leave, failing again,
a grin breaks my lips, the end has finally come.

oh cool uh yea

My heart, My fragile heart
has begun to fall apart
I saw you with her, that evil girl
Ideas began to toss and turn, whirl and twirl
She saw me and slightly waved
Everything froze as I braved
to approach you and her
I dazzled a smile
but my heart strained to break all the while
I wanted to scream my feelings to you
Tell you it was you and you only that I love
But.....I didn't....couldn't
So here I stand wishing you'd hear this
And you'd embrace me in your arms
Yes...that would be pure bliss

Thanx tell me what you think.