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Picture of depressedwavemaster
Registered: June 09, 2003
Posts: 5084
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Wow, you know? That sort of made my body hurt thinking about it. S-i & all. Anyhow. I'll post another one later. Until then, I'm out till monday. Bye all.


None of us can ever be free while others are still in chains. -Leslie Feinberg
Picture of Karategirl28
Registered: February 18, 2004
Posts: 3177
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Shadow, I like that. Good job.
*shrugs* As soon as I write something new, I'll post it.


Hope for the best and expect the worst............take whatever life throws at you...
Picture of ShadowTracker
Registered: April 29, 2002
Posts: 21
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Seclusion

A shadow glides across the ground
Unseen by human eyes
For it is just like all the others
They assume it has a victim to follow
Someone’s footsteps to haunt
How wrong an assumption can be

It wants to link on
To an unoccupied body
It is but a rejected and snubbed apprentice
Who has waited a lifetime for a master
No one needs it...no one wants it...
Any purpose it once had, has long been spent

The shadow cries and screams
For seclusion is an unforgiving companion
Whose finds joy in summoning clouds without linings
Yet no one can hear the screams
No one sees the spilled tears
Those precious gemstones shattering on the ground

All it takes is one...
The knife draws a map
Cartography showing quickest route to freedom
Solitude pours from the gash
No one stops, no one helps
No one cares

It dies in agony, and alone
Forever fading from the Earth
Yet no one gives a ****
Because when it came down to it
That shadow was so dim
Seclusion was the only one willing to be its friend


"There is a difference between knowing the path and walking the path." - Laurence Fishburne
Picture of nikky2rock
Registered: October 18, 2004
Posts: 726
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Prince harry . That is a great poem.


I'll sleep when im dead .
Picture of Banshee
Registered: March 19, 2003
Posts: 733
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oh good god that brings back memories i thought i had buried a long time ago. Good poem


That might not make any sense but right now I'm too tired to explain it to you or to care .......
Picture of princeharryfan22
Registered: April 18, 2005
Posts: 22
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I hate you all
I slam the door
just leave me alone
but you both just scream
at each other
at me
at my brothers
at noone at all.
I open my drawer and it's there
seraded edge gleams
back and forth across my arm
back and forth
back and forth
till the pain in my heart is replaced with the pain in my arm.
Here comes the blood
a thin line of blood
i'm ok now
i'm ok now.


"I think there's something strangely musical about noise." - Trent Reznor
Picture of nikky2rock
Registered: October 18, 2004
Posts: 726
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DARE YOU TO RUN

Things are getting rough
you've got nothing done
Just get your groove back
Coz the world wont wait
And dont you dare run .

You learn and you learn
its not even fun
You think youve come so far
Just to fall back
But dont you dare run

You run all your life
your out in the morning
and out half the night
its time to give up
so dont you dare run

Enough of this
Just run and run
Hear the pounding feet
Feel your racing heart .
I dare you to run .


I'll sleep when im dead .
Picture of LuckyCharms
Registered: April 05, 2005
Posts: 7
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You said I love you,
I said it too,
But did you mean it,
Or was that one big ball of spit,
I cried all-day,
Until my hair turned gray,
You said I love you,
I’ll call you my boo,

You said I love you,
I said it too,
Why did you say that,
If you didn’t mean it,
How could you love me,
If it couldn’t be,

You said you loved me,
I said it to,
I wondered if I ever see you again,
How could I forget that mean little grin,
You said I was jewelry,
You said I was 100 degree,
How could I ever trust you,
And call you my boo,

My friend wrote that peom
Picture of armybrat
Registered: May 14, 2004
Posts: 6
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All I can do is taste the moment
All I can breath is life
Sooner or later, it will be all over
Don't ever tell me by
Because by is the meaning of end
Later means there will always be a time
I hope you're not another dead end road
Could it be any harder to live so far from you
I just hope one day I could be with you
Picture of Banshee
Registered: March 19, 2003
Posts: 733
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I'm standing on the banks of the River
"Welcome to Oblivion,"
they say
greedy smiles flase in the dim light
So this is my end
so eminate
so eternal..


That might not make any sense but right now I'm too tired to explain it to you or to care .......
Picture of depressedwavemaster
Registered: June 09, 2003
Posts: 5084
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When Shadows Shift
April 2005

when I face ye in the dark,
ye Shadow of the darkest Night,
I strong of will and cold of heart,
we lift our blades, salute 'fore fight
when ye face me in the Myst,
I Shadow of the darkest Moon,
ye strong of hand and cold of blood
our fate is to do battle soon

when shadows shift and stand quite still,
when the accursed Fountain has given ye fill,
when thick blood-ties have turned to wine,
ye lose ye heart and hand and will

when I face ye in the dark,
ye shimmer in the fairest pool,
I steadfast as a silent rogue,
we face each other 'fore blood could cool
when ye face me in the Mysts,
I shifting Shade of forest wrought,
ye stubborn name, ye living dead,
whose alliance could with no pay bought

when shadows dance and chant a tune,
when ye have read all from the Runes,
when suspicious heart is paid in full,
the Forest Heart shall be seen soon

when I face ye in the dark,
ye intruder of the darkest Day
I Master of my forest deep,
we stop, we bow, we not engage
when ye face me in the Mysts,
I, the Guardian of the Wood,
ye the ever-present threat,
and listen to warnings--ye should

when shadows cry and whisper round
when traitors all fall to the ground,
when trees whisper and tell your fate,
the minstrel weeps his tears profound


**Well, this has a bit of symbolism in it, if you can find it. I don't know. It inspired a short-story I'm writing now. I may give it to you all upon personal request.
Picture of specialcowz
Registered: March 13, 2005
Posts: 20
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Takes my breath away
deep, dark, mysterious eyes
show no mercy
I am your slave,
Your love has captured me,
Show me your love,
In ways I could only dream of
there is no secert, my love is true
and to put it very simply,
im in love with you
and in a dream world noone can take me out it but you


_me_and _only_me
Picture of lekuche
Registered: April 09, 2003
Posts: 339
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My poem:

I am standing on a hilltop
looking upwards to the sky
it seems beautiful up there
It is beautiful
the sun looks like a giant round gold
the clouds with silver-like rings lining their edges
I look down ,downwards to a total destruction
the earth looks filty
the wake of the fearsome tsunami
The earth looks ugly
It is ugly
Picture of Karategirl28
Registered: February 18, 2004
Posts: 3177
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Thanks y'all, and Ohio; I really like yours alot. It's cool.

LATERS~


Hope for the best and expect the worst............take whatever life throws at you...
Picture of shygirlinthecorner14
Registered: January 29, 2005
Posts: 244
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today she who is not to be named cried,
cried for anyone who cared to see.
she looked to me, what could i do?

she was sitting there helpless,
she was breaking down.
wearing her most unusual frown,
not that she was one to smile a lot.


but this one was different.
she wasn't mad, or angry, or even worried.
but she was afraid of her soul being burried.
afraid anyone should think of her a carbon copy.

not the original, but a cheep nock off,
so she ran away.
hoping to get her own way.
fading away and screaming,"what is happening to me?"

she who is not to be named,
hadn't, but i fear,
had lost something very dear...
something very hard to get back.


originality... of corse not that she had that much to begin with anyway...


Search the land, you'll find another with the same face. Search the Earth, you'll find not one more with the same soul.
Picture of Jenos
Registered: May 03, 2003
Posts: 8901
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Me neither...more newbies and less veterans. Not to mention exams.


I like these calm little moments before the storm.
Picture of Ohiosweetgirl
Registered: November 30, 2004
Posts: 4514
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Ohio, I have finally exceeded your post count.

lol congratulations Smile I don't come here that much anymore.


"I Dream away everyday, Try so hard to disregard The rhythm of t he rain that drops, And coincides with the beating of my heart"
Picture of Jenos
Registered: May 03, 2003
Posts: 8901
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Good job Karate and Ohio, I liked both of them. Ohio, I have finally exceeded your post count.


I like these calm little moments before the storm.
Picture of Ohiosweetgirl
Registered: November 30, 2004
Posts: 4514
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Oh, and Karate, I liked that! Smile


"I Dream away everyday, Try so hard to disregard The rhythm of t he rain that drops, And coincides with the beating of my heart"
Picture of Ohiosweetgirl
Registered: November 30, 2004
Posts: 4514
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UNTITLED.

Plagued with misery, my heart is slowly breaking. Doomed for eternity as my mind is shaking.

When does happiness start and sadness end? I was once told that happiness comes and goes but sadness is there always, no break, no bend.

What quenches our desires today may be the same that breaks them tomorrow. I think about life, and it would be without all this sorrow.

You can't buy happiness, nor can it be borrowed. Where does it come from then? The forgotten thoughts of what was once sorrowed.

As I get older, the problems get more intense. As I get older, my life seems to make less sense.

I just wrote this and didn't put too much consideration into it. So it probably sucks.


"I Dream away everyday, Try so hard to disregard The rhythm of t he rain that drops, And coincides with the beating of my heart"
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