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Picture of Knighthammer
Registered: August 09, 2006
Posts: 1074
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I need an easy friend
I do
With a hand to lend
I do
Think you fit this shoe
I do
Keep a day with you...


The original draft of The Lord of the Rings featured Chuck Norris instead of Frodo Baggins. It was only 5 pages long, as Chuck roundhouse-kicked Sauron's ass halfway through the first chapter.
Picture of Trisscar
Registered: October 22, 2006
Posts: 2530
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Let me hide,
Hide in the nothingness,
Fearing nothing,
is everything,
And that tomorow,
Is Yesterday,
Hoping now,
Is not the future.


J'irai bien.
Picture of YouthVoice
Registered: January 16, 2003
Posts: 12687
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I know how that feels imastar.


"In a time of universal deceit - telling the truth is a revolutionary act." - George Orwell
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Registered: June 22, 2004
Posts: 2343
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let your eyes tell me it's nothing,

when i know it's everything,

i know it's hard right now,

to think of life together.



i just need to understand,

and for you to know,

that as tough as it is,

it will get better.



the things i might say,

i know you don't believe,

but truly, i never meant,

to break your trust.



blame is a nasty game,

one i'm not willing to play,

i know you aren't either,

so why are we doing this?



why can't we let go,

when everything is said,

there wont be anything left,

for there to be a connection.


I have not yet reached my goal, and I am not perfect. But Christ has taken hold of me. So I keep on running and struggling to take hold of the prize. My friends, I don't feel that I have already arrived. But I forget what is behind, and I struggle for wha
Picture of sudha
Registered: March 29, 2003
Posts: 2615
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wow you people write simply awesome poems...i havent been on this thread in real long..
awesome stuff really!!


Dont let ur studies interfere with ur education!!!!!
Picture of ampmaster
Registered: February 22, 2004
Posts: 13971
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Here's two more lyrics sets I wrote

I love you and good bye

I know girl that you
can't be mine
and I know that your
heart won't stay in my life

so I guess I have to say babe
that I love you and good bye

it's hard for me to admit that I can't be with you
I love so that it's tearing me up inside that I can't have you but your happiness matters to me then my own

so in the end girl I have to say that I love and good bye

Oh I have to realize deep down inside
that I just can never satisfy the way he can
so in the end girl I have to say that I love you and good bye

Girl your everything that I ever wanted, everything I that ever needed but you can't happy with me so I have to say girl I love you and good bye, yeah I have to say I love you and good bye



Fallin Away

The jump is on the way
the warzone is in every day
I'm laced up and ready in all my ways
and as I fall I all ways know that

I can't live with this
I need to get away from this
I want to be new for this
I need to get my boots on the ground and walk away

I need to keep running and jumping, flying and diving
If I stop I know that I will die
can't let the demons of the past keep up you see
in the end they all just want to devour me
and as I run you know I know that

I can't live with this
I need to get away from this
I want to be new for this
I need to get my boots on the ground and walk away

It's not you, it's me causing all the confronation you see
it's almost like it's a dream
But then I see that

I can't live with this
I need to get away from this
I want to be new for this
I need to get my boots on the ground and walk away

walk away(echo), because I can't live with this
I need to get away from this
I want to be new for this
I need to get my boots on the ground and walk away

The storm has passed
leaving nothing but glass
I can't let myself return to where I was
to go is to lose my life
to go is to strip away what I have become

I can't live with this
I need to get away from this
I want to be new for this
I need to get my boots on the ground and walk away

The past is dead but comes back to haunt
these spirits of what I was won't let me be who I want to be no matter how hard I try

I can't live with this
I need to get away from this
I want to be new for this
I need to get my boots on the ground and walk away

A hand outstreched so easily blessed saving me from my own dark soul tonight, I'd lost all faith in eveyr thing I once thought was right

but now I see you were with me all the time guarding me in my darkest hour so lead me where you will I have a new life to fill as the darkness in me has died


"The very existence of flamethrowers proves that sometime, somewhere, someone said to themselves, "You know, I want to set those people over there on fire, but I'm just not close enough to get the job done"."
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Registered: February 22, 2004
Posts: 13971
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No because I have the msical talent of one of those little monkeys with thre cymbals. I love to wrtie lyrics though and when I write them or sing them I can hear the music in my head I just can't transcribe it


"The very existence of flamethrowers proves that sometime, somewhere, someone said to themselves, "You know, I want to set those people over there on fire, but I'm just not close enough to get the job done"."
Picture of YouthVoice
Registered: January 16, 2003
Posts: 12687
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Oh I love it Amp. It's really good. Do you actually have music to it?


"In a time of universal deceit - telling the truth is a revolutionary act." - George Orwell
Picture of ampmaster
Registered: February 22, 2004
Posts: 13971
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This is more of a song then a poem

Save You Tonight:

I've fallen again
I'm ready for this to end
I'm sick of this road that can't seem to bend
I don't want to hear about my pain
Just want to be numb again

Chorus:
I can't stop collapsing
I can't stop trying to save you
and I can't stop my heart from going out to you
I just can't stop trying to save you tonight

My heart it breaks when I see others like me
I can't seem to do a thing
How do you save a life?
in those years of strife
how do I save your life?

Chorus

I can't tell people how to live
and I don't know how I survived
so darling come with me to another light
I just want to save you tonight

Chorus


"The very existence of flamethrowers proves that sometime, somewhere, someone said to themselves, "You know, I want to set those people over there on fire, but I'm just not close enough to get the job done"."
Picture of Trisscar
Registered: October 22, 2006
Posts: 2530
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My head is full of thoughts,
Essences of senses,
Emotions that confound me,
Whispers of things that can't be translated,
Yet still known,
Beautiful,
Yet a thing of dread,
They can't be grasped,
Escaping like the wind,
But as the wind,
It gives me lift to soar,
To fly with words that pour forth,
If only I could explain,
These mysteries that taunt me,
Transparent against the real world,
I can't read them,
Yet I sense that they are there.


J'irai bien.
Picture of YouthVoice
Registered: January 16, 2003
Posts: 12687
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Aww...Triss, that's such a sad poem. Frown


"In a time of universal deceit - telling the truth is a revolutionary act." - George Orwell
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Registered: October 22, 2006
Posts: 2530
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My pain overcomes me,
And yet I can't feel,
Tears are flowing,
Yet none seem to fall,
Emotionless,
I cry,
Can anything save me?
From these feelings?
These thoughts that haunt me,
That take away my dreams of peace,
And leave me with nightmares,
That terrorize my sleep,
And make this pain real,
Again and again in my head?
I want to forget,
I want to forget it all...


J'irai bien.
Picture of iamastar
Registered: June 22, 2004
Posts: 2343
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quote:
Originally posted by Trisscar:
Wow Iamastar I really liked that poem. Smile I'm impressed! - It was beautiful
Thanks. It's nice to know that something persoanl suddenly is seen beautifully.


I have not yet reached my goal, and I am not perfect. But Christ has taken hold of me. So I keep on running and struggling to take hold of the prize. My friends, I don't feel that I have already arrived. But I forget what is behind, and I struggle for wha
Picture of fuschiagirl
Registered: September 28, 2001
Posts: 279
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quote:
Originally posted by ohmybex:
Dont look at me
Dont stare
Just because Im heaving
Dont suddenly care

No I cant speak
Dont ask why I cry
My hands are trembling
Stop watching me die

My head is bowed
But not in shame
Im refusing to show you
This unbearable pain

So dont touch my shoulder
Peek into my misery
Im only dying
And you cant save me


all i can say is.. holy shit. which no where nearly explains how much i like this. lol.


Life... It's all about the rythm. http://www.myspace.com/lilgirlwonder04
Picture of Trisscar
Registered: October 22, 2006
Posts: 2530
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Wow Iamastar I really liked that poem. Smile I'm impressed! - It was beautiful


J'irai bien.
Picture of iamastar
Registered: June 22, 2004
Posts: 2343
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if only

I could take away the burdens of your life

so just maybe you could experience life

without worry and pain

I would.

as the world keeps spinning

I long to see your face

because darling, I miss you

I am in need

of a friendly distraction

from this crazy world of ours.

hearing your voice

is a song like no other.

I love you a

little too hard

and a little too much.

if you left

my universe would be no more.

my love would, however, never end.

the world would cry smiles

for they are so filled up

with who you once were.


I have not yet reached my goal, and I am not perfect. But Christ has taken hold of me. So I keep on running and struggling to take hold of the prize. My friends, I don't feel that I have already arrived. But I forget what is behind, and I struggle for wha
Picture of YouthVoice
Registered: January 16, 2003
Posts: 12687
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quote:
YV I really like your poems


Thank you. I like yours too. Smile


"In a time of universal deceit - telling the truth is a revolutionary act." - George Orwell
Picture of Trisscar
Registered: October 22, 2006
Posts: 2530
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YV I really like your poems Smile


J'irai bien.
Picture of Trisscar
Registered: October 22, 2006
Posts: 2530
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Another poem by my brother

Death by Flame

I smell burning flesh
Burning through my soul
It scorches my face, I writhe in pain
There was no warning
The time should not yet have come
Yet it did
The time came
And I left with it
He asked me if I wanted to go
I cried “yes”
Escape the flame, escape the pain
Death called, I cried to him
He came, the flames faded
The pain was gone
Yet so was I

I will not wake in the morning
My skin cut was through like a hot knife through butter
I never had the time
To live life,
To learn and see the things I wished
I could never find
I couldn’t make up my mind
About the things that mattered most
I was a child, there will be no waking for me
I was cradled to sleep by flame…
Never to wake again
Cept in the darkness
Or maybe in the arms of the goddess of death
But there will be no rebirth for me…


J'irai bien.
Picture of Trisscar
Registered: October 22, 2006
Posts: 2530
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Watch,
Another day,
Another day,
Gone,
Never to return,
Never to return,
Fear,
All is nothing,
All is nothing,
Know,
Tomorrow’s coming
Tomorrow’s coming
Brings,
Sorrow again,
Sorrow again,
Take,
Steps Again,
Steps Again,
To,
Watch,
Another day,
Another day,


J'irai bien.
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