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Picture of YouthVoice
Registered: January 16, 2003
Posts: 12687
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Yup.


"In a time of universal deceit - telling the truth is a revolutionary act." - George Orwell
Picture of freedomordeath
Registered: June 02, 2004
Posts: 8347
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Hmmm... This person should know better than to mess with mods.


Live and Let Live. Love and Let Love.
Picture of Trisscar
Registered: October 22, 2006
Posts: 2530
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I agree, Speed needs to take it down a couple, or a few, or a lot of notches.


J'irai bien.
Picture of EarthGoddess
Registered: January 15, 2003
Posts: 3714
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Yeaaah.... The mods really need to deal with this kid.
Picture of speed
Registered: February 05, 2005
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i hope you like mine

No, YN does not approve. Feel free, as I would encourage you to, check into the Rules of Play. More specifically number 3 and 5.

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If god existed he'd be right winged
Picture of Trisscar
Registered: October 22, 2006
Posts: 2530
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My 13 year old brother's favourite poem he wrote.

web of truth, woven with lies


The poem he wrote for me last night. I think he misses me...


My heart soars to see the one I love,
It just wants a glance even from above
but my mind is caged it cannot roam...
so it speaks to you in a simple poem...
Hell burns to hot...
when you leave all that is left is the frosty cold...
Flame or Freeze, people change...
I am not the man I used to be... my anger has melted away and I am left with the frost of discontentment...
My anger does not burn hot anymore, it is cold and channeled...
I am at the edge it seems, cold and ready...
I seek something i lost, a while ago, maybe when i see it my heart with thaw and joy shall spring forth once again...


J'irai bien.
Picture of ampmaster
Registered: February 22, 2004
Posts: 13977
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this isn't a poem per day but's close

Medic's jodie

I dunno but I've been told
medico's the way to go

marching left and marching right
patchin them up day and night

Medico's ready to go
with out us your in the hole

soldier, sailor or marine
medico's are fighting mean

healers, fighters, warriors true
help you out or make you black and blue


"The very existence of flamethrowers proves that sometime, somewhere, someone said to themselves, "You know, I want to set those people over there on fire, but I'm just not close enough to get the job done"."
Picture of freedomordeath
Registered: June 02, 2004
Posts: 8347
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quote:
Post it



Mmmk. This isn't the original one I was planning on, but here's a substitute:

When we leave
what will be left
but bones and dust?
Yet was is valued by us?

Money, things and beauty
We'll all go though
with none of these
Why aren't we happy
while we bleed?

Stupid things, dumb people
all these messed up pressures
I was Epicurean pleasures
not money, fame or beauty
I have only time
and I'll feel sublime.

Don't care about stuff
you won't have them
six feet under
Don't care about your plunder

*

When will they see
with their eyes
when will they see
with their heart?

Don't care
bout your hair
Don't mind
your silly smile
We'll all look the same
we'll all be the same
in the end.

*

We'll all look the same
we'll all be the same
in the end.

------------

If this were a song, the first sing-liner would be the chorus, and the * indicates where it would be repeated. If it were a song, I think it'd be a punk-rockish tune.


Live and Let Live. Love and Let Love.
Picture of YouthVoice
Registered: January 16, 2003
Posts: 12687
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Dedicated to a good friend of mine and fellow YNoiser. Smile

A Friend

I know there's pain that's deep inside your heart
I know there's anger that wont let you move on
You carry with you what happened in the past
And now you shield yourself unable to relax

I see frustration and sadness in your words
And in the surface you carry a strong front
But you can't fool me for I can sense your pain
And I'd give anything to take it all away

The dissapointments of people from your past
Have led you to believe that you should never trust
And I can't blame you for feeling like you do
But I just wish you'd know I'm here for you

I'm just one person, I know that isn't much
But when you need a friend or shoulder to lean on
Remember me and that you're not alone
I don't want you to feel that you are on your own

And I once heard that two is better than one
For if one falls the other can lift you up
Together you and me can make the burden lighter
Perhaps one day you'll see that things are getting brighter

When you are down and blue or happy and at ease
Don't be afraid to talk, just be yourself with me
Your friendship is important and I keep it in my heart
And I don't ask for anything, I care for you that's all

You've been so nice to me, I can't help but do the same
Thank you so much for taking time for me out of your day
A friend like you Alex is always good to have around
And hey one of this days you and I can go hang out


"In a time of universal deceit - telling the truth is a revolutionary act." - George Orwell
Picture of Capricorn_09
Registered: January 15, 2006
Posts: 6155
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quote:
I have another one... But I am afraid to post for fear of scrutiny.


Post it. If you don't I'll stalk you forever.


And I would never feel pain / and never be without pleasure, ever, again / and if the reign stops, and everything's dry, he would cry just so I could drink the tears from his eyes...
Picture of freedomordeath
Registered: June 02, 2004
Posts: 8347
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I have another one... But I am afraid to post for fear of scrutiny.


Live and Let Live. Love and Let Love.
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Registered: October 15, 2006
Posts: 12
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my angel left without me


today i sit underneath this tree,
next to this very stone!
i've been coming here for 6 years,
all of which i’ve been alone!
i can still make out the writing,
that lies above your grave!
in ‘Loving Memory Of An Angel,
and the blessings that she gave’!
we met so long ago,
since then you've been my one and only true Best Friend!
i remembered every second,
up until the very end!
i remember i was driving,
the roads were really wet that night!
i wasn't going fast at all,
but those lights were just too bright!
i remember when i woke,
not knowing what to do!
the very first thing that came to my mind,
was not myself but you!
you laid there just looking at me,
as if it was your final glance!
i grabbed your hand, looked to the sky,
and said, “please one more chance”.
i remember the day of the funeral,
all of our family and friends!
i remember when the preacher said,
“when one life ends, a new begins”!
before they put you in this ground,
i walked over to see you one last time!
i kissed your forehead and held your hand,
and ‘one more chance’ went through my mind!
i asked God “why not me,
why my best friend”, and what i did so wrong?
He said “everything has purpose,
and that life must be lived on”!
so i live it on this very moment,
always remembering the day!
that God sent me My Angel,
and then took her away!



kimznoize myspace


lilly kim
Picture of YouthVoice
Registered: January 16, 2003
Posts: 12687
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Nice Jenos. You are good...very good.


"In a time of universal deceit - telling the truth is a revolutionary act." - George Orwell
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Registered: September 19, 2001
Posts: 2202
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Funny money honey
Coney phoney baloney


"Freedom is not Free"-Korean War Memorial, Washington DC.
Picture of Jenos
Registered: May 03, 2003
Posts: 8901
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Barcodes fly across foreheads
a weapon in this time of need
food is necessary to survive
without nourishment we live

the cruel fangs bite deeper
the blood runs thick and true
our souls hang in the balance
of a monster more evil still

the bodies fall from the blade
why is freedom so expensive
grace and elegance surround
the beast of lies and hate

This isn't too hard, guess what it is about.


I like these calm little moments before the storm.
Picture of YouthVoice
Registered: January 16, 2003
Posts: 12687
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Lost

Where is my mind?
My mind is somewhere else.
Can't concentrate.
I can't control myself.
I'm lost, I swim
in the memories of past.
I look for comfort
but my mind cannot relax.
I dream of you
You're with me in my sleep.
But waking up
is harsh reality.

(okay I'm still working on finishing this one)


"In a time of universal deceit - telling the truth is a revolutionary act." - George Orwell
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Registered: July 24, 2006
Posts: 1313
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You know, this is the place where we come to bare our souls to the world without fear of ridicule, but you come in and ridicule us anyway, with your lame excuses for poetry, and then each acting like the other has become the next Heine or Poe. It makes me sick to think that you have ever passed a poetry assignment in school with that crap. You both rhyme words with themselves, which is only excusable in the case of "orange." The sheer fact that you think that you can write peotry makes me sick.


"The deepest circle of Hell is reserved for betrayers and mutineers."--Captain Jack Sparrow
Picture of YouthVoice
Registered: January 16, 2003
Posts: 12687
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lol...good catch Jenos.


"In a time of universal deceit - telling the truth is a revolutionary act." - George Orwell
Picture of Jenos
Registered: May 03, 2003
Posts: 8901
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Did Bushsupporter just copy five lines from the middle of his last poem? I think he did!


I like these calm little moments before the storm.
Picture of marine16
Registered: February 22, 2002
Posts: 2066
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Eek

Did Bushsupporter just write the greatest piece of poetry of all time? I think he did!

Eek


Marine 16 - the man, the myth, the legend
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