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Registered: January 15, 2006
Posts: 6138
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Just something I wrote when I was bored. I already know it sucks, so don't persecute me. I AmI am just a person, Just a regular kid. During the week I go to school. On the weekends I sleep in. I am just a person That you pass on the street. Just another face in the crowd That you won't remember passed next week. I am just a regular person; There's nothing to remember me by Except that I'm out to save the world One person at a time. I am just a normal person Doing the best I can. And even if you don't like it, This is who I am.
And I would never feel pain / and never be without pleasure, ever, again / and if the reign stops, and everything's dry, he would cry just so I could drink the tears from his eyes...
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Registered: December 18, 2005
Posts: 8
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klguddat the imagery is so awsome but what you're saying is confusing
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Registered: September 10, 2003
Posts: 433
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One of mine with no title...so yeah. Tell me what you think.  City lights dance across your face As I readjust my gaze You're reading my lips as I feel your embrace I hold you and I am amazed The quality of life has lessened As I hold you in my arms tonight I should've have learned a life lesson But all I could think about was life You should've have said no and taken me home But we both know I'm to stupid to leave Now I'm stuck with all of this and I think you should know You're not the one who has caused me to grieve My pain is selfish, as my life is dull And you are leaving me while I'm stuck here at home This has no where to go, so I'm waiting to end this lull The silence is echoing inside my head I say goodbye to the empty space in my bedroom I feel as if I'd be better off dead But I have to suffer the consequences and accept my doom You've left the city lights behind and taken the dark cold night Into your arms I fall, the smile just says it all You can't take the words back as you take the knife With one full swing, you begin to fall I laugh as I see you crying in your head You're pain reminds me of someone I once knew Someone who loved and lived to believe, And decided against it, and now she's dead
Just call me Captain Sillypants.
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Registered: December 18, 2005
Posts: 8
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My wispered words are lost, Floating away through the mist, Like hungry seagulls seaking at all cost; Not close enough to feel sunshine's kiss, In the cool sand, by the rolling tide, Surrounded by the sea's horizon, forever on and wide.
So I sit, not at all by myself, As another world drifts through the pail blue skies, There's me and the ocean, I know nothing else, So with all my memories I lye, For the same thing will not happen tomorrow, The ocean waves fight, carry me from my sorrow.
Washed-up shells have beauty unseen, Underneath lies the shining breathetaking Wonders that'll seem like a dream, It's these fragile secrets that're waking Winds that throw themselves along my back, And my mind ponders all I lack.
Sail boats glide acrossed deep blue glass, My thoughts wrapped up in the warmth of the past; Disappearing over the horizon is my white mass, How nice to be detatched atlast.
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Registered: December 18, 2005
Posts: 8
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I’m the victim of a stolen yesterday
But who isn’t?
I told myself this And time went on and on With no relief There’s no relief when you’re mind Is the terrorist And it’s your own thoughts that scare you when you lie in bed at night and wish that he was there to hold you and make you feel that everything important wasn't gone and that caring wasn’t worth it-- or at least not now
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Registered: May 03, 2005
Posts: 258
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This is one of many I wrote to my girlfriend. It's one of my favorite: With every hour, every sunset I think the winding path will narrow Hilly back roads oscillating up and down Puddles collecting at the lows And comfortable warmth at the crest We have traversed the country In search of peace and happiness Liberty from the stressful world A source of direction for each other Stars at their zenith to shed light on the path We have taken many roads and have climbed many hills Since the time we met to form one navigable path Straight through to the end of time Into the sunset blazing red on the horizon Looking back to recall our fun and smiles We touched each other, warming our bodies, As with the sun’s submerging beneath the earth, There comes a chilly cool air, which is quelled By the embracement of two lovers in the country, Enchantment resting between two moist lips Time will tell the destiny of our love But surely to be found there is a bright future, Distanced from the horizon, Beckoning onwards our journey into the sunset As time has passed, I have come to accept my future The thought of my life playing out before me Frightened me at first, you and you alone in my eyes, Could it have been possible to conceive the gorgeousness of life? Had my once lonely destiny been altered? I am in awe of your spectacular charm Your determination, wit, beauty, uniqueness I am drawn to you like the very sky is drawn to the Earth At the crest of the very hills we traverse You have amazed me with your love A new meaning given to the sunset, A new meaning given to life, I have been made to feel necessary again As if I am important at least to you In the grand scheme of things I want you, I need you… I love you I write it graciously and without second thought or hesitation The words skip across the paper with gleeful resolution To the sad truth of a once belittled boy Who had been living a life he wished not to have No more, no more I see the glorious truth of life And I have you to look forward to Dancing about my mind day in, day out As I breathe, I breathe you This path we take is uncertain I think it will narrow The hills will cease And the direction assured The path may narrow to one point Showing the way to the sunset And everlasting joy But it is uncertain I don’t see where this path will lead me Or take us for that matter And I can never say for sure But I turn beside me and see you And I thank the sunset That I am not alone I thank the sunset That I have you Evermore
"No, this trick won't work...How on earth are you ever going to explain in terms of chemistry and physics so important a biological phenomenon as first love?" - Albert Einstein
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Registered: February 04, 2006
Posts: 626
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My eight year old sister wrote a poem.... BEAUTIFUL MESSAGE I look at the world As far as I can see All the world is beautiful So many things to be Theres things like trees Insects like bees All of them send one message The world is beautiful to me. I THINK MY SISTER IS REALLY GOOD FOR AN 8 YEAR OLD!!
The grass is greener on the other side, until you get there.
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Registered: April 10, 2006
Posts: 7
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I'd like to make a correction on that poem. ------ "My regain is overpowering as I face the crowd of life. I found my strength I'd thought I'd lost when I see the weakening smile."
kthanks, bye. -TaBbY
-If You Have Nothing To Stand For, You'll Fall For Anything--
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Registered: April 10, 2006
Posts: 7
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Strength[B] I run the race of time in a battle of victory or defeat. The ticking clocks of life swarm over me as I try to decipher my willingness. I run and I run until my strength has then withered. I'm losing the battle. My knees buckle beneath me as my sould begins to depleat. I fall as though I've been defeated yet, I realize what's to come. The strength I'd lost is swelling up within me as I feel reborn. I seen you. I heard you say that it's not over and I can do it. My regain is overppwering as I face the crowd of life. I've found my strength I'd lose when I see the weakening smile. I found my strength.
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Registered: January 15, 2006
Posts: 6138
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Thanks.
And I would never feel pain / and never be without pleasure, ever, again / and if the reign stops, and everything's dry, he would cry just so I could drink the tears from his eyes...
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Registered: August 20, 2003
Posts: 1689
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I liked "Free Spirit", Hurley. Just wanted you to know. : ] And I best liked your second to last stanza, Cap.
The most beautiful thing we can experience is the mystical. It is the source of all true art and science. --Albert Einstein
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Registered: January 15, 2006
Posts: 6138
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It’s Deeper Than ThatIt’s deeper than that, There’s more than you know. It’s hard to explain, But I can’t let it go. ‘Cuz it’s deeper than that, I need to tell you but I can’t. I wish you could know, ‘cuz it’s deeper than that. Deep inside me, there’s a searing pain. My blood hot, boiling in my veins. Like someone ripped my heart out And tore it in half. You’d never understand ‘Cuz it’s deeper than that. But it’s so much deeper than that. I cry myself to sleep every night And fake smiles and laughs every day of my life. It’s deeper than that. I wish I could say, But it’s a secret I can’t tell you, At least not today. 'Cuz it's deeper than that.
And I would never feel pain / and never be without pleasure, ever, again / and if the reign stops, and everything's dry, he would cry just so I could drink the tears from his eyes...
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Registered: September 30, 2005
Posts: 459
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i really like your style sphinx...heres a couple of mine... WE DIDN'T MEAN TO: I cover my face, bring my knees to my chest Hardly feeling the sting where your hands come to rest Over and over, so I just silently wait If I survive this, I leave up to fate Eventually you scream "get out of my sight!" A six year olds future isn't looking too bright In a house, in a town not to far away Look in the corner to see what she say "I hate you" is engraved there on the frame Over and over, the words read the same In my head, I can still hear him scream Wishing to death, the belt was a dream And yes, I recall every slap to my face There are some bruises, even time can't erase FREE SPIRIT: There isn't a reason, besides I'm alive Into the world I cant help but dive With the music blaring loud in my ears There's nothing to do, but throw away fears I only have one shot, or maybe there's more But just in case I'll pick myself off the floor Finding nothing in the world to be black or white I'm in no place to decide whose wrong or right Even if I am the only one to love me In my heart I'll know I'm eternally free But I cant lie, that isn't completely true Of those who adore me, I have quite a few And my love for them isn't any less strong Nothing in my life feels to be wrong When I soar like a bird over this land Why should I crawl, when I know I can stand?
I'm RUNNING Out Of Time To Make This Right
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Registered: January 15, 2006
Posts: 483
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Just some crap I wrote when I was pissed off the other day This isn’t real, this isn’t life This isn’t joy, this isn’t strife This is just me being myself Sitting around, my heart on its shelf This is not who I want me to be This is a shell of someone not free This is a dream that I can’t get to end This is a me that continues to bend Always trying my best but I never change And now I’m not at all special, not even strange It’s a constant effort and I’m getting tired Tired of being this invisible liar Just blending in, being human filler A waste of space, a door or a pillar An overlooked knickknack that’s been there for years I’ve stopped being a person, no hopes no fears I bide my time with no where to go No one to turn to, nothing left to let go. It’s just her now, all alone by herself Sitting around, her heart on its shelf.
~*The optimist proclaims that we live in the best of all possible worlds; and the pessimist fears this is true.
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Registered: October 27, 2005
Posts: 12
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To suffer You live To struggle You live To cut You live To obey You live To exist You live To rest You die To escape You die To be free You die To forget You die At the end You die To live Is to die I chose to live But I want to die
a world with no deceivers , is like god with no believers
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Registered: June 02, 2004
Posts: 8337
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Speak! Like the Morning with beams of sun warming me you shall speak to me.
Live and Let Live. Love and Let Love.
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Registered: October 27, 2005
Posts: 12
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For your soul I don’t weep From your nightmares I can’t sleep You left this world of mine But I’m doing just fine I’ve found what I need It’s for my arm to bleed *** No more grief, no more sorrow I don’t care if there is no tomorrow I don’t know why I live; I do, but in vain So I cut my life away, I cut a vein I have lived, I have suffered much And your curse I have once touched *** I shot the door, I turned off the light And enjoyed the loneliness of the holy night Pure blood lying on my blade All the miseries of the day would fade A helpless soul that’s what I am And my life, my grave, has just began so , plz tell me what do you think ?
a world with no deceivers , is like god with no believers
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Registered: December 15, 2003
Posts: 168
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Life’s Lessons Remember In the face of it all smile You never know What will come your way Be kind Someone is always In more pain than you Do whatever you can To lessen that pain Shine you light Someone will see it And take up hope You can change the world One person at a time One moment at a time Never waste time Or it will escape. It’ll leave you empty And lonely Wondering what happened to life. Live like each second Might be your last And live like you might live For a hundred more years. Never forget to smile.
Smile cuz life is too short not to enjoy!
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Registered: February 22, 2004
Posts: 13926
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It hit again that need the longing pulling me down in to the pit again so I'm stuck again in this hell again no way out my friend I need it like the junkies need their fix is it a drug? maybe I just know I crave and need it and I cry cause i wann be free of it
"The very existence of flamethrowers proves that sometime, somewhere, someone said to themselves, "You know, I want to set those people over there on fire, but I'm just not close enough to get the job done"."
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Registered: August 20, 2003
Posts: 1689
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Ooh! I like. I love the prose form. It's what I write in most. Really great imagery; I felt like I was there watching the drunked dude and feeling everything that was going on. What I like least is the "I hope he's okay" lines, but they do help point out that "it's all for love". I really love the scenes in the poem.
The most beautiful thing we can experience is the mystical. It is the source of all true art and science. --Albert Einstein
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