thanks for all the feedback on the lyrics, I'm happy that everyone liked it.
About the music behind the song, I'm not good with music I just like to write. Whatever you imagine the music to be should be fine because unless someone does it for me, these words are never going to have music behind them.
quote: it' great writen but I hope that u don't feel really like that
Alas, I do feel that way most of the time. The kids at my school are really not nice and I'm usually their main target though I do have friends to stick by me.
my name is ardiana, I'm albanian, I just signed in in this forum , I just wnated to say my opinion to your song, it' great writen but I hope that u don't feel really like that,
The lyrics are good but do you have sheet music to go along with it? I get tunes from other songs going with the words in my head and a beat or notes helps me a lot. Like I have a vid of a dancing cat on my comp and the music for that is what I keep hearing with this and trust me it's not the right music. Anyhoo Thankies and good job.
In my lifetime I have been to bed with men, women, and odd pieces of furniture....Oh and my avatar says "The only abnormality is the inability to LOVE!"
It's pretty dern good. It's a little cliche, though, with, "Will it ever end," etc. Try and make it like nothing you've ever seen before. I know its hard, but that's a song that'll sell.
hmmmm.......... wow. not bad, not bad at all. see my poem called the cry. its here.......... somewhere
-Some call me a wandering soul. Some call me a traveler without a purpose or destination. Some call me diffrent, resevered, maybe even dangerous. What I truly am is what you'll have to find out for yourself.
I have not yet reached my goal, and I am not perfect. But Christ has taken hold of me. So I keep on running and struggling to take hold of the prize. My friends, I don't feel that I have already arrived. But I forget what is behind, and I struggle for wha
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