this is a poem i call sunflowers. i wrote it recently and its not quite finished. i hope u all like it and plz dont copy.

Sunflowers

In unknown time
in unknown plot
i stumbled upon
a sunflower lot


and in the fields glazed gold
i happened to find
a rare bueaty and mind
of a sunflower raided red

but of a terrible disease
of i was possessed
so i took the pleasure
in bringing the red sunflowers to rest

and that was murder itself
so my soul forever stained
in vibrant velvet soft petals
which drove me completly insane

ok this is all i wrote so far. tell me wat u think

veddy dark.... I like it

Reviving a month old thread that had never been posted on....

Go to the adoption thread.

i thought it was okay.

yeah...