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Picture of ALITTLEBITOFDAWN100
Registered: October 12, 2005
Posts: 3
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Sea foam splassed;Rocking to and fro were the waves. This is my view. I sit on the warm sand feeling the zephers push back my thin hair.You can hear only the beating of your heart as you sit on this unknown coast watching the birds soar over your head.

It's just the start of something I threw together. What do you think??????????
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Registered: April 03, 2004
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I think you should crawl back into your bottle on the ocean.


The man who smiles when things go wrong has thought of someone to blame it on. - Robert Bloch
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