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Picture of FinasGod4
Registered: December 22, 2006
Posts: 45
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Object of this is to continue on the poem, every post being an ABCB quatrain.

At precisely twelve A.M.
I found myself awake in bed.
Grabbing the good book,
Here's what I read:


Enter souls of righteousness/Enter and be held/Accountable for your actions/Only shame may tell
Picture of Ikki14Reed
Registered: August 17, 2001
Posts: 5812
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Quickly Aguagon awoke
From this dreaded dream
And upon realization
Fina's Gods were not as they seemed


Picture of Ikki14Reed
Registered: August 17, 2001
Posts: 5812
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But Fina did die
And that was the end
Of his cursed tale
And ICELAND's friend.


Picture of FinasGod5
Registered: December 22, 2006
Posts: 14
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This was Athena
for she finally heard the cry
of her beloved fina
trying to stay alive


Fina=God
Picture of FinasGod6
Registered: December 22, 2006
Posts: 27
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"Fina! Stop crying!
All is okay!
Come in and rest;
You've had a long day."


Fina=God
Picture of ICELANDsGod
Registered: December 22, 2006
Posts: 16
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But Athena never came
And Fina began to weep.
ICE looked on with pity
And promptly fell asleep.


And then I found the way through ICELAND, and my life was begun anew.
Picture of FinasGod7
Registered: December 22, 2006
Posts: 47
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"ICE words chilled
As he called out for Fina
Since there was no response
He prayed 'Deliver me Athena!'"


"The seaweed is always greener in somebody elses lake."
Picture of ICELANDsGod
Registered: December 22, 2006
Posts: 16
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ICE came too
Appeared in the den.
"He was attacked
"By tigers in the glen."


And then I found the way through ICELAND, and my life was begun anew.
Picture of FinasGod7
Registered: December 22, 2006
Posts: 47
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"Oh Fina my beloved!
Let me come to your aid.
I promise to be gentle.
I will not cause you pain. "


"The seaweed is always greener in somebody elses lake."
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Registered: January 16, 2003
Posts: 12687
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Poor Fina he is hurt
My heart aches with his pain
But I cannot get close to him
I feel I'll go insane


"In a time of universal deceit - telling the truth is a revolutionary act." - George Orwell
Picture of Ikki14Reed
Registered: August 17, 2001
Posts: 5812
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"Oh wise Fina
What happened to your life?
You used to be filled with love
Now you're filled with strife."


Picture of FinasGod4
Registered: December 22, 2006
Posts: 45
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He slowly moved his head
A little side to side
As a tear fell down his cheek
A part of me died.


Enter souls of righteousness/Enter and be held/Accountable for your actions/Only shame may tell
Picture of FinasGod
Registered: December 22, 2006
Posts: 6
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What was he hiding,
This hero of mine?
"Please, you must tell me!"
I started to whine.


Fina=God
Picture of Ikki14Reed
Registered: August 17, 2001
Posts: 5812
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I shivered my bones
And looked in Fina's eyes
Evil lurked within them
As did bitter, shallow lies


Picture of FinasGod6
Registered: December 22, 2006
Posts: 27
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But I can't make out
What it is way out there.
I can tell it's not good;
There's a chill in the air...


Fina=God
Picture of FinasGod4
Registered: December 22, 2006
Posts: 45
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"What can it be?
Is it a thorn in his side?
He won't let me touch it
He's too full of pride."


Enter souls of righteousness/Enter and be held/Accountable for your actions/Only shame may tell
Picture of FinasGod
Registered: December 22, 2006
Posts: 6
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I thought to myself
"I need some light"
I can make out the shadows
Something isn't quite right


Fina=God
Picture of FinasGod6
Registered: December 22, 2006
Posts: 27
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I'm really confused.
What's wrong with him?
I see something in the distance,
But the light is really dim...


Fina=God
Picture of FinasGod4
Registered: December 22, 2006
Posts: 45
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"What are you doing here?"
I asked my holy man.
He only looked at me,
Then screamed again.


Enter souls of righteousness/Enter and be held/Accountable for your actions/Only shame may tell
Picture of Ikki14Reed
Registered: August 17, 2001
Posts: 5812
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I didn't know what to do
As I opened my eyes
I ran down the stairs
And saw Fina in disguise


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