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Picture of Blank04
Registered: November 10, 2004
Posts: 87
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He puts the bottle down on the wooden table,
It is silent.
He stares at the wall for one long moment.
His eyes are a fixed on a picture hanging on the tan walls.

The fire roars,
It is silent.
The man remains,
Eyes fixed on the photo.
A husband and wife,
A little girl.

The phone rings,
It is silent.
The world of this man is focused upon the colors of the picture.
He tries to take it apart with his eyes,
He examines the photo piece by piece.

The drawer opens,
It is silent.
The man figures through the desk.
His eyes remain fixed on the photo,
His hand searches,
searches for an answer.

He finds what he was looking for.

The drawer closes,
It is silent.
He lays the gun on his laps,
eyes still fixed on the picture.
He unloads the clip and places the bullet in his gun.

The gun is loaded,
It is silent.
The man rises from his seat,
He walks slowly towards the picture.
He raises the gun to his head,
The bullet is loaded, the trigger is cocked.

The trigger is pulled.

In one instance,
a life was seen,
a life was heard,
sound reached his deaf ears.

He had pulled the trigger,
yet the bullet remained in the gun.

The bullet never lies...


"This all just one big sh!t sandwich and pretty soon we're all going to have to take a bite."-Full Metal Jacket
Picture of iamastar
Registered: June 22, 2004
Posts: 2343
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I liked the poem. I was excellent but I have a question. I don't want to sound like a retard but if he pulled the trigger than wouldn't he have died? He died didn't he? I am sorry if I sound stupid but I am just trying to get this.


I have not yet reached my goal, and I am not perfect. But Christ has taken hold of me. So I keep on running and struggling to take hold of the prize. My friends, I don't feel that I have already arrived. But I forget what is behind, and I struggle for wha
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