She tripped on a broken branch. Gets up as quick as she can. Now limping. Blood dripping from her leg, nose and head. She keeps running. . Trying to catch a breath or two. The footsteps behind her are getting closer as she looses her pace and starts going slower. A big thump . . She's collapsed on the ground. He's caught up.

He's got the young brunette by the hair. Dragging her. Pulling every strand that fits in his hand. Her body struggling to withstand the pain. Hitting rocks and branches as she's being hauled along on the abandoned homes ground. It's dark. About 2:30 in the morning and in a remote area. No cell phone reception. No one to hear her screams. He gets tired of dragging the 13O pound girl. Stops a couple of times to catch a breath and kicks her in the stomach and head repeatedly. A way of punishment for tiring him. She's cataleptic for a while. Lost in a dream of nothing but pitch black. The man throws her carelessly onto the porch of the abandoned home where she lands on wood chips, bent, rusted nails and broken glass. He takes advantage of her while she's unconscious. Frustrated because he is not pleased. Then the girl slowly revitalizes. Finds herself tied on to a wooden chair. Tape over her mouth and chains around her ankles. She try's to get away and he comes at her with a heated wire. . .

She feels the stove hot wire burning her skin. With every strike he takes to her body. Leaving marks. Bleeding excessively. Leaves the girl anesthetized. Hours of torture pass by. It is now twelve in the afternoon.

The man cleans himself up and hoes down the girl. He starts the car. Black Altima, tinted windows, 20' rims. License plates reading: 'DEATHX3' Goes back to the house and dries off the girl. Un-ties her. Takes the tape off her mouth, picks her up and puts her in the car. They're driving for about half an hour. End up half way down the block from her house. Cops blocking off the streets. News trucks and camera crews' video taping every second that goes by. She see's her parents crying. Trying to speak to the news reporters. The girl breaks down in tears. Asks the man to let her go. He doesn't answer her. She asks him why he did this to her. He doesn't answer her. Tells her to get out of the car. She runs towards her friends and family. They hug her in painful cry's of happiness. The man walks up and tells the girl to stand away from her family. Threatens everyone. Cops are defenseless along with everyone else. She asks him once more why he's doing this to her. He just smiles and says "Because. You didn't want me. . .But I wanted you. I had to have you. And this. This was the only way to do it." The girl gets a feeling in her stomach this is the end. Her mother gets the exact same feeling. Sobbing she steps closer to her daughter. Hugs her and tells the man, "Please don't do it." The young girl and her tortured, traumatized, helpless soul turns to her family and friends and says I love you. Then with the remaining strength left in her body, hugs her mom as tight as she can. Tells her she loves her and thanks her for everything. All this in less than 6O seconds. He shoots the girl in the head. Instantly killed by that one gun shot. Left dead in her mothers arms. Blood everywhere. Mother screaming at the top of her lungs crying out every tear in her body. "Serenity Rouge. Returned to her family after 23 days for the last 2 minutes of her life. Shot dead in her mothers arms. I'm Vanessa Youth. Live, On Fox 11 News. . ."


i Wrote this last year , What do you think about it?

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