Registered: December 05, 2004
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I feel lost in this world Like it's not where i belong Like home is so far away I'll never return But then sometimes I feel like I'm so close To the return
People who try to act like someone they're not are strange, not people who act like themselves
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Registered: June 28, 2003
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i love this poem! It reminds me of being confused for a while and then after a few minutes, i would return to normal and then i would speak out what is really on my mind.
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Registered: July 26, 2004
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yeah, good idea.
Evitere Les Contrefacons.
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Registered: November 21, 2004
Posts: 14
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i think it's good i would like to see what else you have got.
Live life to the full cos you never no when it's gonna end...
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Registered: July 26, 2004
Posts: 2891
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It's a good start, but try working more on the rythem and context. keep working! 
Evitere Les Contrefacons.
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Registered: February 18, 2004
Posts: 3177
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wow, story of my life. I like it, this is really deep. keep it up i guess. laters~ Ps welcome 
Hope for the best and expect the worst............take whatever life throws at you...
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