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Picture of Queline
Registered: September 30, 2004
Posts: 23
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Run

In a circle that turns into a hole that you now look to the sky from below, crawling along the dirt to reach the frield with a house and shed aside one another with a rainbow as bright as the sky.

In a crying state of mind with rage in place along comes a mess of desired sense of a naked state.

Soon to be my world alone,

No one can enter my door invited with a bite soon to demolish all that roam the realm I lead

That i can stand and watch you look back wondering who is that alone in that world that is demolishing me along the way as they grow

making me think why wonder had the chance to know instead turn my back to that world and

Run!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Registered: June 22, 2004
Posts: 2343
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Why does love have to hurt like this?,
I thought that what we had was a sweet heavenly bliss.
As I dream about what was once ours and what we had,
I realize that this foolish game called love is just a teenage fad.

I sober up to the reality of being alone until the end,
All I hoped for was a lover, a quiet soul, a free spirit, and a forever friend.
As I wander down this long narrow path,
I turn around to feel the warmth of his newness as if it were a bath.


I have not yet reached my goal, and I am not perfect. But Christ has taken hold of me. So I keep on running and struggling to take hold of the prize. My friends, I don't feel that I have already arrived. But I forget what is behind, and I struggle for wha
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Registered: February 18, 2004
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yeah Jamaica, that is a very pretty poem. I like it, especially the flow of it.


Hope for the best and expect the worst............take whatever life throws at you...
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Registered: June 22, 2004
Posts: 2343
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Jamaica,
That was a beautiful poem. I totally get what you are saying.


I have not yet reached my goal, and I am not perfect. But Christ has taken hold of me. So I keep on running and struggling to take hold of the prize. My friends, I don't feel that I have already arrived. But I forget what is behind, and I struggle for wha
Registered: June 28, 2003
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Paradise by:ME

I knees often tremble at the sight of fear
i cry, i crumple myself into a mass of pitiful state
My legs are too weak...
But hope returns
My tear-stained cheek was caressed by the wind
I looked up at the sky
The heavens look inviting...
I gazed with wonder and my fear was gone.

It is paradise i saw
in all its glorious power
radiating with warmth and their purple huesand wonderful pink clouds and orange wisps
i strove to forget my fears....

The horizon is clear now...
I got up from the tree stump that i sat on.
I dusted the debris from my skirt, wiped my tear-stained cheeks and walked back home...

......the sight of paradise forever eteched in my mind.
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Registered: September 22, 2004
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It's good, I like the poem.


"Take risks and never regret them."
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Registered: June 22, 2004
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Please explain this poem please. I somewhat understand what you are saying but I want to have a clearer understanding.


I have not yet reached my goal, and I am not perfect. But Christ has taken hold of me. So I keep on running and struggling to take hold of the prize. My friends, I don't feel that I have already arrived. But I forget what is behind, and I struggle for wha
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