
Registered: March 02, 2005
Posts: 76
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I am new to the boards, but I am going to post a poem everyday from now on. . . read if you want. here are the two I have done today and yesterday.
3/1: Mental rages battles won and lost turmoil being turned yet war lingers on
The true view blurred yet through mine eyes doth the clearest of sights shines through that which is
Reluctance save me from such why dost thou keepst me from my reward
Surmounting and taken tame not the beast serve it well with pity down it with pity
Pity, pity, pity wallow in pity why me, Pity? take me away
Remove my pleasure take that too? if only that were the answer I can think of none.
Make me better I want it; please soothe me with thy name if only you would . . .
Take my possessions not for them am I being I only want what I love can I have it?
3/2: Return to my assured self take not from the world truth make I t not mine own reality, hits hard.
Auspicious to myself pondering and wondering let the wheel spin within the greasy wheel is broken
Why not with remorse take it upon myself fault of none, to me neither fate or not to me hateful
Mirror in the bathroom and in the bedroom explain to me what I see do you see? I don’t
Explain to me, I cannot comprehend such logic fades and returns is that why? sheesh
Devil’s advocate, no? sinister and cynical . . . exasperated to be sure yet why not? damn . . .
Why me why from me why not me why to me why me and myself why not someone else
Taking it from me is taking my soul can I do without it in the long run no.
Thanks for reading.
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Registered: December 11, 2003
Posts: 9501
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I like them.
"Regardless, I have always, and will always, succeed."
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