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Picture of LiangRome
Registered: March 02, 2005
Posts: 76
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I am new to the boards, but I am going to post a poem everyday from now on. . . read if you want. here are the two I have done today and yesterday.

3/1:
Mental rages
battles won and lost
turmoil being turned
yet war lingers on

The true view blurred
yet through mine eyes
doth the clearest of sights
shines through that which is

Reluctance
save me from such
why dost thou keepst
me from my reward

Surmounting and taken
tame not the beast
serve it well with pity
down it with pity

Pity, pity, pity
wallow in pity
why me, Pity?
take me away

Remove my pleasure
take that too?
if only that were the answer
I can think of none.

Make me better
I want it; please
soothe me with thy name
if only you would . . .

Take my possessions
not for them am I being
I only want what I love
can I have it?

3/2:
Return to my assured self
take not from the world truth
make I t not mine own
reality, hits hard.

Auspicious to myself
pondering and wondering
let the wheel spin within
the greasy wheel is broken

Why not with remorse
take it upon myself
fault of none, to me neither
fate or not to me hateful

Mirror in the bathroom
and in the bedroom
explain to me what I see
do you see? I don’t

Explain to me, I cannot
comprehend such
logic fades and returns
is that why? sheesh

Devil’s advocate, no?
sinister and cynical . . .
exasperated to be sure
yet why not? damn . . .

Why me why from me
why not me why to me
why me and myself
why not someone else

Taking it from me
is taking my soul
can I do without it
in the long run no.

Thanks for reading.
Picture of CelticNewAger
Registered: December 11, 2003
Posts: 9501
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I like them.


"Regardless, I have always, and will always, succeed."
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