Originally posted by H3va3nsAng3l: My bad .....I'm sorry.....
You shouldn't need to feel bad, when they're just arguing over nothing. We're not even talking about what this topic is about, which is just like any other topic that these same people are in, anyway.
In the End, we will remeber not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends. - MLK
Damn now this guy knows what he's talking about ....u start off bye saying hello....and that it is my mistake as much as any one others...thats fucking good...stick around homeboy....i 'll need u for when i need help to spell or when i can't find a dictionary...but damn he's good.
I don't think Jenos is one to crush girls into the ground. I don't know him at all, nor does he know me, but he doesn't seem the type.
For the poetry, it's interesting. Yes, like the others, if you weren't sure how to spell something you should look it up so next time you will know, but I can understand what words you meant. In the last line, it sounds like you've grown to endure your eyes. Maybe you could readjust the sentence to mean you've grown to endure a sad lonely life. Yes, it's difficult to be alone, but unfortunately its equally your fault as anyone else's. You need to take the initiative to reach out to others. Of course, not everyone will respond how you want, but someone will. And that's how you build relationships. It starts with a hello.
Perhaps if you were to improve your spelling and your conduct, then people would be more willing to open discussion on your piece.
I'll start off. The first 'poem' means nothing coherent or metaphorical that I can make out, and the last line of the second piece is not quite right; it is too long.......also it is horrifically spelt. Remember you are writing poetry, it is still supposed to be spelt right, particularly if you are trying to get us to critique it.
Only simple and quiet words will ripen of themselves. For a whirlwind does not last a whole morning, nor does a sudden shower last the entire day.
Where in my post did it say I didn't understand the tone? Nice comeback... "you shut the hell up." It was clever. I am put in my place from that. Really.
It was intended to be condescending. If you couldn't figure that out you are a waste of precious air. How about I not watch what I type and you shut the hell up.
I like these calm little moments before the storm.
There is a big difference between being a grammar nazi and just trying to comprehend what the hell someone is trying to say because their grammar sucks so badly. Learn that difference.
I like these calm little moments before the storm.
how funny i just came from a thread talking about how yn is all grammar nazis and then i come over here and yall are highlighting on someones spelling. it was just an interesting observation.
Posted by Yuka: ...try to stick to the main topick, in which was ment to be, like.
That sentence was incredibly baffling. At first, I thought the last word "like" was a noun. As if the topic = like. Then I thought it was used as a verb. But no. Then my California girl instincts kicked in and I thought, "Oooooh! I see, she means "like" like a valley girl. Hah!" But wrong again.
That is the most misleading comma I have ever encountered in my life. Come to think of it, "like" is completely unnecessary and obtrusive, obviously. Ugh. Like the rest of the post.
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