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Picture of tinkerbellroxx
Registered: March 25, 2005
Posts: 17
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It's Funny How.....

its funny how hello
is always accompanied with goodbye.
its funny how good memories
can start to make you cry.
its funny how forever
never seems to really last.
its funny how much you'd lose
if you forgot about your past.
its funny how friends
can just leave you when you're down.
its funny how when you need someone
they're never around.
its funny how many lies
can be packed into one "love letter".
its funny how people forgive,
even though they can't forget.
its funny how one night
can be packed with so much regret.
its funny how ironic
life turns out to be.
but the funniest part of all is
none of that is funny to me.

i don't know about y'all, but i love life.Even though it can sometimes let you down. you can't change it. you just have to figure it out as you go along...
Picture of perriwinkkle108
Registered: October 30, 2005
Posts: 43
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Wow, that is a really good poem! it's amusing, very!


We are the one making the path from life to death SHORTER.....
Picture of MoonGoddess
Registered: August 10, 2005
Posts: 64
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I enjoyed it. you are very talented but Jenos it right, it could use a bit of work on the rhyme.


All It Took Was A Knife And A Desperate Heart.....
Picture of Jenos
Registered: May 03, 2003
Posts: 8902
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It needs a little work, but for the most part, I like it.

Which is unusual. Usually I don't like these kind of poems, but even though this one is simple, I enjoyed reading it.

The rhyme scheme needs some tweaking, but is good. Did you spend a lot of time on this? I think the ending was my favorite.

Anyone else reading this, I'm in the mood to actually be nice to some newbies. Gasp, the horror.

Tinker, in the future, post your poems here:
http://boards.youthnoise.com/eve/forums/a/tpc/f/63510584663/m/57410863763


I like these calm little moments before the storm.
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