How are the following poems


Tears of Sadness

As the rain comes down,
And my tears fall down.
My heart cries out
But your love runs out.

You left me in the cold
With no where to run,
And with no where to cry.

You gave me no chance,
Though I gave you a chance.
I loved you
But you didn’t care.

You left me to myself
Alone in this world.
I thought are love would last
But the truth soon came out.

I tried to hide my sadness.
I tried to ignore it.
I tried to deny it,
But your hate came out!

Unwanted Past

Walking down the hallway of a familiar home,
I came upon two objects of my everlasting memory.
They were a reminder of the life I use to know,
The life and past I’d like to forget,
But just can’t.

I focused my eye upon this picture,
A picture containing the two girls I most despise,
Yet love and care for with all my heart.

These two girls are an enduring reminder,
Of the actions I took to end my life,
But could not fulfill.

I pray for them,
And hope they might come back to me,
But my wishes are never fulfilled.

I ask God to bless them,
But the Lord shames them,
And brings more heartbreak to their family.

I wish I could take back what I said and did,
And I wish God would take back their actions.
I wish for my mind to forget,
But God makes me hold on to my unwanted past!

Love is…

Love is colorful sunsets,
Roaring seas,
Adorable pets,
And green trees.

Love is sparkling rivers,
Towering mountains,
Flocking birds,
And steaming fountains.

Love is this perfect creation,
Vast oceans,
Natural wonders,
And human blunders.

God is this eternal love,
And eternal love is finishing the race.

A Godly life on this worldly planet.
Deserves the love of God,
And eternal life,
Through Jesus Christ.

Thank You God

Thank you God
For
These caring people,
And wonderful leaders,
Which are gifts to my ailing soul.

Thank you God
For
Their kindness,
And understanding.

Thank you God
For
Their warm-hearts,
And accepting nature.

Thank you God
For
These new friends,
And the connection we have in and through You.

Thank you God
For
Answering my calls,
And prayers to You.

Thank you God
For
The friends You have given me.

Thank you God
For
Giving me love through these fishers of men,
And most importantly through You,
Lord God.

Friends for Life

In this world of turmoil,
There are few certainties.
But one is the care of friends,
Friends that stay beside you for life.

Friends that love,
And enjoy you presences.
Friends that trust,
And can tell all.

Friends that can bring joy to your life,
And a smile to your face.
Friends that help you through the worst,
And cries alongside you.

We are united in Christ.
We are the best of friends,
Friends for Life.

GOD WITH ME

I sin,
And God forgives me.
I pray,
And God listens to me.

I sin,
And God forgives me.
I cry,
And God comforts me.

I sin,
And God forgives me.
I go to church,
And Gods with me

I sin,
And God forgives me.
I accept God,
And God accepts me.

I sin,
And God forgives me.
I die,
And God leads me home.


By Scott1123

You are proud of your discriminative and hateful views on homosexuality? I fear that you have taken these views because you are afraid of homosexuals, or perhaps you are homosexual yourself, and are afraid what the zealots in your Christian community will say, so you spout the crap that they have brainwashed you with. As for your views on abortion, it is not up to you whether or not people choose to terminate a pregnancy. What if the foetus was not going to survive outside of the womb anyway? Or if it was a teen pregnancy, which you claim to "stand up against"? You have been brainwashed, along with all other religious idiots, by the religious community.
Religion started thousands of years ago as a way to control the masses, and that is what it is now.

Tears of sadness: borderline of average
Unwanted Past: expressive and interesting
Love is: sappy fake love song-like
thank you god: bleh.
friends for life: along with tears of sadness
God with me: boring

overall: try putting more originality into it, and pull away from the savior stuff. That's just what i think

Some are dull and repetitive whereas others start out pretty good, but you kind of ruin it near the end.

The poems are good and no offense but these kind of poems are becoming apart of the daily grind of life.

tha potree s butifull i luv it

Not good. Sorry, but every sentence is a cliché.

Bex

Angst, angst, crap, repetitive crap, crap, repetitive crap.

You're welcome.