does someone want to continue this thread cuz i think its a fun idea but no one is continuing!

Parents

I hate you
I scream
the sadness overflows
the madness rips my heart and my head is in pain
what is wrong with you?
everything is wrong with me
you are the one thing that separates me
from doing everything i want
but
you are the one thing that saves me
when what i want gets out of hand
and the dreams
become nightmares
and the laughs
become tears.
i hate what you have done
but i love you in the end

i liked that good topic
next one: friends and enemies

FIRE

An orange-yellow flame
Crackling embers keep it alive
Guarded by a screen
To keep in this dangerous thing.

Next topic: Parents

Internet

My addiction,
my communication,
tying up the phone line.
checking my email sign.
my away message is up.
someone asked sup?
spend too much time on here.
keeping in touch with those who are dear.
should prolly get off soon,
before I see the moon.

LOL ok, I should really stop being an insomniac....

next topic: fire

Mental Scars

Tattered dreams,
fading sanity.
happiness was gone in an instant.

Hounding me,
forever doging my footsteps,
Greif is all that is left, except

No advice makes light of it,
no answer lies in the doctors syringe,
nor in the padded walls of self pity.

Terror,
Fear,
All that is left of a once proud person.

Next Subject easier:

internet

Broken Hearts

my hearts in two
because of you.
you i loved
but now i've had enough.
my heart is shattered.
and we will never be reconciled.


I don't know how to write this subject that well so...well I don't like this one anyways.

Next topic: mental scars.

Dreams

Laughing, giggling, naive and free.
Caught up in splendid ecstasy.
Where did all that go?
Was it just my imagination or a dreamy dream?

This sucks but it come off the top of my head.
Next one: Broken Hearts

Vengence

She stole his heart right out of my hands,
From what I remember it was warm in his presence,
She hurt me once so shame on her,
She hurt me twice so shame on me,
Now it's time to hurt her.

Next topic: Dreams

Sleep

Hard and fast
Slow and steady
Either way
I'll be ready

Short and sweet just how I like um

Next topic: Vengeance

A cool comforting feeling
Wetness abound
Wearing clothes disgraceful in public
Anywhere but here
Diving under
Holding breath
Opening eyes
Amazed at the secrets held
Beneath the murky waters
Swimming--
Where she was whole

Next topic: Sleep

THE MOON

My sign of hope,
my one true light.
when walking
and darkness ruled.
It was full.
it was bright.
It was there,
when the stars weren't.
on that faithful night.

i don't really know anymore.
Next topic: swimming

Finals

They were coming.
everyone knew they had to come, but why?
all this, all this work, all for this one day in life.
they could decide your future, but they could ruin it as well.
Study for hours, no more fun, no more dancing, no more laughing.
the finals were coming.
then they came.
sweat dripping down you neck, your eyebrows arched.
what does this mean? i know i know it.
the finals have come, and taken all life away with them

sorry that really sucked, but that topic wasnt really poem material, from my point of view.
next topic: the moon.

Crush
He had cherry lips
And a broken smile
Sandy blonde hair
That went on for miles
He smiled at me
And I at him
Then I was taken--
My heart took him in

Next Topic: Finals

ANGER

being pissed off without care.
knowing that the happiness isn't there.
feeling the adreniline pumpin my veins.
trying to keep myself almost sane.
punching a wall,
watching the blood fall.
screaming inside.
waiting to end this negativity ride.


I likes....
next topic: a crush

Home


Theres a place I go every day
not every day of my life, but most days
I have to leave on account of work
or maybe my friends want me to come out
but I'll be back again to sleep
or maybe I'll cook myself a meal
there's mail for me, more bills
but that's okay because this place is MINE

the next topic is anger

missing out

a normal life
one fraught with the fluttering
of social butterfly wings
you...always on the sidelines
(not that you minded)
but still, you wonder
have you missed out?
playing it safe all this time?
well, really, its not like they'd tell you
even if there was a party....somewhere
what's wrong with staying with those you trust?
what's wrong with living the other life?
you've seen families, friends, futures torn apart
because someone had "a little too much fun"
it's not who you want to be
and yet, you wonder - have you missed out?
off to college you go, but even then
the call of the night life falls on deaf ears
maybe one day, you'll hear it
maybe one day, you'll join the "normals"
in their dramatic pursuit of "life"
it isn't likely, but still, you wonder
will i miss out again?

next topic: home

hello everyone - i joined youthnoise awhile ago but havent been on it much since then - i saw this board and was sucked in so here's my debut and i'll be back!! also, not sure if i did the right topic - still getting used to the formats here....

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You cannot improve a man through punishment, not can you bring peace through war or brotherhood through brutalization. - Edward Guinan

Stars

I needed someone to talk to tonight when mom when mental,
I couldn't find you until I looked up to the stars.
Ever since you went away,
I sit outside and look up at the big stary sky.
I try to figure out what star you embraced,
And I ask you questions and tell you everything just like I did when you were here.

Next topic: Dreams

Light

For once in my life
I did something right
I turned away from the darkness
and looked towards the light.
Everything was beging again.
I got my second chance.
The light pointed on me
and I started to dance.

LOL I like this one...sorta got off topic, but oh well.
Next topic so it doesn't get lost: Stars (in the sky)

quote:

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Ikki:
Next topic: Murder

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You guys skipped this...

Murder

There I stood, watching intently.
Learning, feeling pain.
I heard many cries, so full of lies.
If only I could set them free.
Their hands bleed, their souls indeed.
Forever in debt.
I would have stopped him, but I froze.
I cry out now, my soul indeed.
Did I do the right thing, setting the voices free?

I'm not sure if that ended up being about murder, but I think it's pretty awsome the way it came out.
(I just visualized a scene from something, it's not me.)

Next topic: Stars (from the night sky)
or Chaos': next topic: light

Hurt

Do you feel the pain?
I cant.
im numb all over and the cold of the ice is slowly eating away at the warmth of my heart.
I wish I could feel the pain that lives inside my body, my soul, my life.
im too cold, and the cold freezes over any aspect of light, of feeling, of love.
i wish it hurt.

that wus rly bad but off the top of my head as always.

next topic: light