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Picture of picaresque
Registered: September 30, 2007
Posts: 22
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I wrote this short story for my english class. Comments?


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Picture of gaby_babyy
Registered: June 09, 2008
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Its one of those stories..that I dont know, You can imagine being in it and watching everything going on. I love those type of books Smile


-gaby [There are two great days in a person's life - the day we are born and the day we discover why. -William Barclay]
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Registered: June 06, 2008
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That was a very emotional story, what did you get on it?
Picture of picaresque
Registered: September 30, 2007
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http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2427134/1/

alright, there it is. the paragraphing wouldn't work, but oh well.


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Picture of picaresque
Registered: September 30, 2007
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gahh sorry. It won't let me post it in a nice format on here, so I have to wait three days to upload it on fictionpress. [:


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