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Picture of mzbasketballstar
Registered: April 13, 2007
Posts: 9
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A heart is whole until its empty. A heart is pure until its broken. In so many words I could explain the meaning of a broken heart. I have been there before.The depth of my heart is so deep but is filled with the burning desire of hatred and enrage no longer love.What happened u might ask.LIFE and LOVE! To be told that you are beatiful means nothing now.It is nothing but lies I've been told.How could the world be so bold.No one cares for no one.My heart neds to be heeled and freed from all of this hurt and selfishness but all I can do is look in the mirror and see the face that is called beautiful be so ugly.Everything about me has become ugly.My heart is no longer a heart it is nothing because no one cares.It's useless.A broken heart is still a broken heart untill it is heeled.A heart is still empty until it's whole again.Everything that has happened to me makes a difference either good or bad. For me it's always pain.


Olivia J.
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Registered: June 09, 2008
Posts: 136
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...Ive had so many broken hearts..
My bf had cheated on me, I loved
him with the depth and width of
my heart and soul..wen we broke up
I felt a huge hole in my chest..
but i still find every single
day of life beautiful.
I love the aches and pains..I feel
so human..and you know, life hurts and
you'll have to get used to it.

"life hurts and it kills"
I dont really understand the guys that
become emo just because they think life sucks
and the only thing it brings is hurt
and suffering but life also brings
happiness and beauty. I understand thers
people with a real depress issue but the
people that just say life is a bunch of
bull..i really dont understand ur problem..

I kno im sounding like a bitch when i say this.[i dont mean to] but damn, get over it!!..a broken heart hurts, i kno!,,but get over it and move on.
you'll never enjoy life if
you hold on to all that useless shit..
i cried for a whole week n was depressed for another month n a half over a break up so dont tell me i dont know wat hurt is.


-gaby [There are two great days in a person's life - the day we are born and the day we discover why. -William Barclay]
Picture of gaby_babyy
Registered: June 09, 2008
Posts: 136
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im just posting this bcuz ive seen soo many people doing this..if you have to write stuff n just let go of watever..if ya want to you can make ur own diary/journal on...
my-diary.org
i have one too so wutever...


-gaby [There are two great days in a person's life - the day we are born and the day we discover why. -William Barclay]
Picture of munni143
Registered: July 13, 2008
Posts: 1
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Dear Everyone...its true that the parts of body will be attached but whereas broken heart never be...coz the internal feeling which it is hurted by dearones the heart becomes broken...the reason for broken heart may be LOVE r LIFE...and its not easy to get recovered soon as its like before..so never break anyones heart until they get depressed by their life n think to end their life...who knows the same situation will be going to face by us...thanku
Picture of Kharybdis
Registered: April 15, 2003
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It has absolutely no redeeming value. I've seen more evocative language on the side of a bathroom stall, and that's not hyperbole.


Those who profess to favor freedom and yet depreciate agitation are men who want crops without plowing up the ground, they want rain without thunder and lightning. They want the ocean without the roar of its many waters. Frederick Douglass
Picture of Lindsay07
Registered: March 24, 2007
Posts: 10
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Hi,

I think it's a really great piece. I can't say if it's technically a poem or not, but it has a lot of beautiful expression.
Picture of EarthGoddess
Registered: January 15, 2003
Posts: 3715
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This thread intensified my hatred for poetry.
Picture of Kharybdis
Registered: April 15, 2003
Posts: 1396
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quote:
poem |ˈpōəm; ˈpōim; pōm| noun

a piece of writing that partakes of the nature of both speech and song that is nearly always rhythmical, usually metaphorical, and often exhibits such formal elements as meter, rhyme, and stanzaic structure.
• something that arouses strong emotions because of its beauty

ORIGIN late 15th cent.: from French poème or Latin poema, from Greek poēma, early variant of poiēma ‘fiction, poem,’ from poiein ‘create.’
I see a brick of text arranged in an approximately coherent fashion. A poem, not so much.


Those who profess to favor freedom and yet depreciate agitation are men who want crops without plowing up the ground, they want rain without thunder and lightning. They want the ocean without the roar of its many waters. Frederick Douglass
Picture of mzbasketballstar
Registered: April 13, 2007
Posts: 9
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I know this is crazy replying to my own poem but I jus wanted to say that this poem means so much to me because Its what s been happening to me all of my life and I would love if people would reply and plus it shows that even thought people see me as a jock thats not who I am I am a loving carining person who happens to play a lot of sports


Olivia J.
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