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Picture of silentscreams
Registered: June 09, 2005
Posts: 35
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Hi...

I just wanted to see if any of yall would like my poetry. Here is one...

Unspoken
Completely unspoken

The distance
So distant

And it's so far
Far from the page turner
So far
From from the blooming rose

I'm unseen
Invisibly too real

You're seen
Visibly too fake

The infliction of devastation
cutting so deep
Deeper and deeper
until I'm completely finished

Finished
And here I am

Too real
for the agonizing
heartbreak

Too real
for the abused
love

Too real
for the loss of
time


"If I can stop one heart from breaking, I shall not live in vain; If I can ease one life the aching, Or cool one pain, Or help one fainting robin, Unto his nest again, I shall not live in vain." - Emily Dickinson
Picture of kountrykate3
Registered: July 08, 2005
Posts: 250
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wow...this is great...really deep...deep than anything I've written
Picture of Knighthammer
Registered: August 09, 2006
Posts: 1074
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Not my cup of Mountain Dew. I like these better:

There is no emotion, there is peace.

There is no ignorance, there is knowledge.

There is no passion, there is serenity.

There is no chaos, there is harmony.

There is no death, there is the Force.
-The Code of the Jedi



"I have defied gods and demons."

"I am your shield; I am your sword."

"I know you; your past, your future"

"This is the way the world ends."
-Cortana


The original draft of The Lord of the Rings featured Chuck Norris instead of Frodo Baggins. It was only 5 pages long, as Chuck roundhouse-kicked Sauron's ass halfway through the first chapter.
Picture of NoiseInTheShadows
Registered: July 24, 2006
Posts: 1313
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wow. me likey


"The deepest circle of Hell is reserved for betrayers and mutineers."--Captain Jack Sparrow
Picture of Capricorn_09
Registered: January 15, 2006
Posts: 6150
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I like it. Grear imagery.


And I would never feel pain / and never be without pleasure, ever, again / and if the reign stops, and everything's dry, he would cry just so I could drink the tears from his eyes...
Picture of Zoasterboy
Registered: July 12, 2006
Posts: 364
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I like it! Currently im looking for poets for a new page on my site in the projects section that will feature poems from various artists. You can view the site (its not done) at zoaster.150m.com

If your interested, you can contact me at zoasterboy@msn.com

wow I sounded very buisness like right there.creepy.


-yah
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