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Picture of elle_belle34
Registered: July 13, 2008
Posts: 2
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Hey! I really need some help. I am an Anti-War girl who is very Christian. I really want to have a song that could be played on the radio that is Anti-War. I need some help writing it though. I am really bad at writing songs(the tune and the words) because...I just can't express it enough...

I can sing, play piano and i can play like 3 chords on a guitar =P but I really want to get a song out there that can emotionally hit alot of people and just make them think...woah...why are we there?

you know?

respond to this if you can help.

If this thing actually happens I will totally be so thankfull and will donate the money i earn (if i earn it) to charities helping other countries and pulling our troops out of Iraq. I will also donate to many many MANY other charities and (whoever helps me) will (duh) get their share =)

THANKS!!

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Registered: September 30, 2008
Posts: 3
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Hello friend!
Well I cant say you can have this song, but check it out and see if you even like it, send me an e-mail back if it you like it... I wrote it like 2-3 years back so its not much...

PS: I am not a religious person, just so you know... I only believe in god, good and evil! And a big point after that!

Master of war

Raise up
Stand up high
Don’t you forget, you are mine
Wave… after wave
And you are just another slave

Come on soldiers into my war
Come on soldier move it more

Mines under your feet
Booby traps in the street
Hanging by a string
And you love me when I sing

Master of disaster
Master of war
I am leading to disaster
Get ready for war

Come on people build more tanks
Come on people into my hands

Soldiers fighting in the front
Starving children in the bunk
Hearing news of your sons
Breaking news of the new guns

Master of disaster
Master of war
I am leading to disaster
Get ready for war

Come on child play no more
It’s your time to face the war

Little child
Little child
Don’t you leave mamas side
Rockets over sky
Bombs blow your mind
Still you learn what I say

Master of disaster
Master of war
I am leading to disaster
Get ready for war
“Get ready for war”

“Yeah”

Raise up
Stand up high
Don’t you forget, you are mine
Wave… after wave
And you are just another slave
Just another slave
Just another slave

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Tamer Qtaish
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Registered: May 24, 2007
Posts: 46
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that was very good karybdis


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Registered: April 15, 2003
Posts: 1496
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quote:

War! huh-yeah
What is it good for?
Absolutely nothing
Uh-huh

War! huh-yeah
What is it good for?
Absolutely nothing
Say it again y'all

War! huh good God
What is it good for?
Absolutely nothing
Listen to me?

Ohhh? War! I despise
Because it means destruction?
Of innocent lives

War means tears
to thousands of mothers eyes
When their sons go to fight
and lose their lives

I said - War! Huh Good God y'all
What is it good for?
Absolutely nothing
Say it again

War! Whoa, Lord ...
What is it good for
Absolutely nothing
Listen to me?

War! It ain't nothing but a heartbreaker
War! Friend only to the undertaker
War! It's an enemy to all mankind
The thought of war blows my mind

War has caused unrest in the younger generation
Induction then destruction-
Who wants to die?

Ohhh? War Good God y'all
What is it good for?
Absolutely nothing
Say it, Say it, Say it

War! Uh-huh Yeah - Huh!
What is it good for?
Absolutely nothing
Listen to me?

War! It ain't nothing but a heartbreaker
War! It's got one friend, that's the undertaker
War has shattered many a young mans dreams
Made him disabled bitter and mean
Life is much to precious to spend fighting wars these days
War can't give life, it can only take it away

War! Huh Good God y'all
What is it good for?
Absolutely nothing
Say it again

War! Whoa, Lord ...
What is it good for
Absolutely nothing
Listen to me?

War! It ain't nothing but a heartbreaker
War! Friend only to the undertaker
Peace Love and Understanding;
tell me, is there no place for them today?
They say we must fight to keep our freedom
But Lord knows there's got to be a better way

War! Huh Good God y'all
What is it good for?
You tell me
Say it, Say it, Say it

War! Huh Good God y'all
What is it good for?
Stand up and shout it.
Nothing!


ur welcum dun need 2 credit me or nething n this isnt copywrited dont worry


She's mortal a meta-model Barbiesattva she's gotta lotta Prada-prana
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Registered: February 06, 2007
Posts: 72
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Elle_belle34, welcome to yn! In the future, please refrain from using your personal email address or contact information. These are public boards, and there's no telling who may look at them. The noisemail feature is available for members to contact each other privately. Thanks for posting, and be a little more careful in the future.


In a situation where a moral decision must be made, we should always choose truth, in the expansion and enrichment of knowledge, in ourselves and others, and at all levels of our being.
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