YN Home  
Home Causes Boards Debate Tools Join YN!
Search YN:
 
YouthNoise Home Page    Topics    Youth Speak Out | Chat | Activism  Hop To Forum Categories  OTHER STUFF  Hop To Forums  Randomosity    Does no one like your poetry or want to read it? Get noticed here and write some!
Go
New
Find
Notify
Tools
Reply
  
-star Rating Rate It!  Login/Join 
Registered: February 16, 2003
Posts: 56
Posted   Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post  
I wrote a poem in 3rd grade and everyone liked it. Later, in 5th grade, it got published. Well, here it is..

Flowers
In the sunlight flowers glitter like a gorgeous unicorn. In the moonlight they glisten in the roaring wind. If you could here a flowers voice, then you would know what it is like to glisten in the moonlight. The flowers shine on the shining moon. In the dark blue waters, you can see the flowers' reflection. You can hear the flowers rustling along with the wild glittering unicorns. You can see the flowers on the unicorns' horns. As the sun begins to rise, the unicorns go back to their mystical land. As the flowers bloom by the sun's rays, they are ready for the next day.
Registered: February 16, 2003
Posts: 56
Posted   Hide PostReply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post  
what do u mean "dont abuse the smilies"?????
Picture of geminiangel521
Registered: August 17, 2001
Posts: 6970
Posted   Hide PostReply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post  
We have lots of other poetry threads..

Anyway, don't abuse the smilies Wink
Registered: February 16, 2003
Posts: 56
Posted   Hide PostReply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post  
thanks for reading it Big Grin it makes me happy to know that someone really enjoys my poems
i would really like to hear some of your poetry as well Wink
Picture of prettyinpunk016
Registered: March 30, 2003
Posts: 514
Posted   Hide PostReply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post  
I read it! It was really good. It was really creative, you know? All the stuff about flowers glistening and such...I thought it was pretty.
Back in third grade, we had to write books. I wrote a book of poetry and it won first place out of all the third graders...ah, but it seems i have lost my gift...
Registered: February 16, 2003
Posts: 56
Posted   Hide PostReply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post  
Y doesn't anyone wanna read my poem?!?! Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown Frown
 Previous Topic | Next Topic powered by eve community  
 

YouthNoise Home Page    Topics    Youth Speak Out | Chat | Activism  Hop To Forum Categories  OTHER STUFF  Hop To Forums  Randomosity    Does no one like your poetry or want to read it? Get noticed here and write some!