i wrote this poem wheni was mad. so tell me what you think of it. its called burning inside

it will not stop that burning fire
makes me wonder why im tired
i burn inside its just too hott
i cant take it it must stop
put it out please help me
let me out i plee i plee
it will not stop i can not take it
let me out i wil not make it.
~~~katie~~~

Very, very good. Try some punctuation, though, especially where seperated phrases are on the same line. Also try to even out the number of syllables on each line.