This is a poem I wrote. It pretty much explains my life right now, but if you could give me your opinion on it, that would be great. Thank you.

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My sadness holds a bond to me
No matter the place I go,
And with this sorrow comes a fate
I soon am sure to know.

My sanity has run away
And abandoned my tormented mind,
And in its absence, a void has formed,
Leaving all joy behind.

My brain is home to a fog now,
So dense that nothing gets through,
I fear my life is draining,
And there is nothing I can do.

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Yours,
Solemn

Thank you for the feedback. I just write to let things out. Sometimes they end up writing I guess. Keep sending me feedback please.

Yours,
Solemn

for i am speechless! that was such a good poem. I am a poetry teacher and i wish u was in my class.u write with such knowing and it is just a beautiful talent u have...dont give up even if u feel that way...u have a gift and u should let it be seen...

good poem, illustrates a clear picture, too bad you feel that way right now though. definite talent though.

wow
thats really good
usually when some people use a rhyme
scheme its corny but urs is really good