THEY ALL BEGAN SAYING THAT THEY WERE SORRY THEY HADNT BELIEVED ME AND THAT WE COULD GET THE PROBLEM FIXED. FINALLY THEY EXPLAINED THAT THE DOCTOR HAD DONE SOME TESTS AND THAT I WAS PREGNANT.
My problem with this part is that they would automatically assume "Oh I guess we were wrong and she was raped" as opposed to "My daughter has been having sex with her boyfriend"
"You learn about equality in the classroom but you find out about it in life" - Campus Confidential www.myspace.com/yogore
Why your story is 15410% BS: - Porn-ish schoolgirl-pastor rape. - 4 gay parents. - A threat. - Non-believing parents. - You have no emotion in your writing. - An engagement. - A screaming doctor. - Triplets. - Six bedroom house. Not because it's impossible, but because if you have enough money to have a six bedroom house, your 4 gay parents also have the money to get a lawyer and sue the crap out of the pastor. - A pastor having a sleepover with 3 girls (this already sounds like the beggining of a porn movie). - All the crap the other girls went through at said sleepover.
"Regardless, I have always, and will always, succeed."
Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha haha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha. Idiot. You are the worst fiction writer I've ever seen. Good luck trying to make someone believe that bull****. Heh.
The man who smiles when things go wrong has thought of someone to blame it on. - Robert Bloch
i wrote a long post on how i felt about your story and why i think it's not true, but the youthnoise peoples didn't approve it apparently (is that feature new?)
Are you sure it sent? I have no idea why it wouldn't have posted. There is no new feature that would stop it from going. Did it have a trigger word and it just hasn't beenr eviewed yet?
"You learn about equality in the classroom but you find out about it in life" - Campus Confidential www.myspace.com/yogore
Love Love Love that picture...it's simply amazing. Yes, the story is complete crap. Try to resubmit...I would love to read your side of it. And yea...what is a trigger word? They just said they'd have to review mine... ~S~
One boy, one girl. Two hearts beatin wildly. To put it mildly it was love at first sight. He smiled,she smiled,they knew right away.These were the days they'd been waitin for all their lives.For a moment the whole world,revolved around one boy and one girl.
i wrote a long post on how i felt about your story and why i think it's not true, but the youthnoise peoples didn't approve it apparently (is that feature new?) so i'll just say, it's awfully convenient/sad that such a beautiful popular perfect girl could get into such a perfectly horrible and conveniently terrible situation.
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don't make up stories for pity
LMFAO I <3 that pic. And yea...the story is completely ********...try to resubmit lol...I'd love to see someone else attack like I did. ~S~
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One boy, one girl. Two hearts beatin wildly. To put it mildly it was love at first sight. He smiled,she smiled,they knew right away.These were the days they'd been waitin for all their lives.For a moment the whole world,revolved around one boy and one girl.
i wrote a long post on how i felt about your story and why i think it's not true, but the youthnoise peoples didn't approve it apparently (is that feature new?) so i'll just say, it's awfully convenient/sad that such a beautiful popular perfect girl could get into such a perfectly horrible and conveniently terrible situation.
This.is.complete.bullsh*t. I not only agree with the other two comments, but this story is completely fake. No one is going to tear off your uniform...this isn't a porno. I'm pretty sure you don't wear uniforms to youth groups anyway. No wife is going to stare at her husband raping a girl lol. That was just stupid on your part to put in there. NO ONE, unless they're really old, gets rushed to the hospital, or even goes to the hospital, for simply passing out. I've passed out numerous times (eating disorders) and I've only been taken to the hospital a couple times b/c of injuries from when I passed out. The whole thing about the gay parents is just bullsh*t as well. You just don't live happily ever after like that lol. No doctor is going to scream when doing an ultrasound...that's just stupid too. My aunt has quads and no one screamed when she found out she was carrying four babies. My mom had my sister and I and no one screamed when they found out we were identical twins. Doctors just don't do that. They're trained to see this stuff lol it's not that much of a shock. So yea hun you need to stop making up stories...although if you did want to write like a teen novel...you got a good start right here. Too bad that youthnoise is for TRUE stories...get a life. ~Serena~
One boy, one girl. Two hearts beatin wildly. To put it mildly it was love at first sight. He smiled,she smiled,they knew right away.These were the days they'd been waitin for all their lives.For a moment the whole world,revolved around one boy and one girl.
Oh my gosh. Could you please resubmit this, wanna, with some lower-case letters and some uppercase letters? this is annoying and it's giving me a headache.
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