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Picture of Jenos
Registered: May 03, 2003
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An Ode to Bush. In the rhyme scheme of The Raven by Edgar Allan Poe. I would have put it in "Post Your Poems Here" thread, but I found this forum to be more appropriate.

Once upon a District dreary, leadership was weak and weary,
In the Capitol, Congressmen had something new in store.
After Taliban demonstration the George Bush administration
Said we had an unsafe nation; “Terrorism is at our door.
Give up some rights, lest we let the terrorists through our door.
Just your freedom, nothing more.”

Ah, distinctly I remember just how every Congress Member
Put out rights like they were embers as each was allowed the floor.
The Patriot Act was on the morrow, power the government had to “borrow,”
Liberty was full of sorrow – sorrow for what’s lost for war –
For the wrong, unjust invasion that Bush called a needed war –
Rights given up for evermore.

Then the President beguiling our sad country into smiling,
By the actions taken against the grim faces terrorists wore.
“Though your rights be shorn and shaven,” he said, “The U.S. is no craven.
We’ll attack the terror’s haven, landing on Iraqi shore –
Give me power to drive the terrorists away from U.S. shore!”
Quoth the President, “Give me war!”

Then the country grew much tenser as the people called to censor
Any article, film or paper written against the President’s war.
“Traitor!” they cried, “A true American would give up all they can
To the government; you don’t need the rights you had before!
We need security, just forget the rights you had before!”
Quoth the President, “Give up more.”

And the President still is getting increased power, still is sitting
On the White House throne; we have given him four years more.
And his aims and goals are seeming of a Dictator’s that’s dreaming,
And the people, faces beaming, give him what they’ve worked their whole life for;
The Bill of Rights, our foundations, could be ground into the floor
To be lifted – nevermore!

-Jenos


I like these calm little moments before the storm.
Picture of Jenos
Registered: May 03, 2003
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Other than being Poe, making a Poe pardoy will of course result in inconsistencies. And this was basically for fun, there wasn't much of a vendetta behind it, although I just dislike Bush in general.


I like these calm little moments before the storm.
Picture of depressedwavemaster
Registered: June 09, 2003
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Good poem, though since it was based on Poe's poem, the rythem is a bit sketchy in places. I like the content, but I only bash Bush concerning two issues: homosexual rights and environmental protection, or lack thereof (for the both).


None of us can ever be free while others are still in chains. -Leslie Feinberg
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Registered: May 03, 2003
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Thanks for the kind words, Sunset.


I like these calm little moments before the storm.
Picture of Sunset
Registered: October 17, 2003
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This is a fantastic piece, Jenos.
-Sunset Smile


Picture of Jenos
Registered: May 03, 2003
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It's simply satire, nothing more and nothing less.


I like these calm little moments before the storm.
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Registered: October 06, 2004
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great poem, but I am now thourally confused...is the poem a joke?...


O of where dost thou hail, Celephanil, Celephanil? Why dost thou wander in Tengelwar great, why on the sea do you sail?
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Registered: May 03, 2003
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Heh, so true Celtic.


I like these calm little moments before the storm.
Picture of CelticNewAger
Registered: December 11, 2003
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Bush would hate Poe. Well, perhaps not hate him, but since Bush can't possibly be very wise in literature...


"Regardless, I have always, and will always, succeed."
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Registered: February 19, 2005
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I get your sarcasm and I dont want your pity, it was just a reply and that is all. poor Edgar's style is bein shat upon


I am what I am and I LIKE what I am and F*ck whoever can't deal with it!
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Registered: May 03, 2003
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Yes, how sad.

Finn - Thanks.


I like these calm little moments before the storm.
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Registered: January 16, 2004
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If that dude didn't get your sarcasm, I have my utmost pity for them.

Jenos-
You rock.


L'enfer, c'est les autres. -Jean-Paul Sartre
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quote:
Originally posted by psycopoe:
its too bad you're supporting someone who's taking that right away from you and thats all I'm going to say.


Who are you speaking to?


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Registered: February 19, 2005
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its too bad you're supporting someone who's taking that right away from you and thats all I'm going to say.


I am what I am and I LIKE what I am and F*ck whoever can't deal with it!
Picture of Jenos
Registered: May 03, 2003
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Heh, its called an opinion, to which I am fully entitled.


I like these calm little moments before the storm.
Picture of HeliosLoire
Registered: December 02, 2003
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You're clever, but you're also stupid.
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Registered: December 11, 2003
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I feel like crying...


"Regardless, I have always, and will always, succeed."
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Registered: April 03, 2004
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That's wickedly wonderful.


The man who smiles when things go wrong has thought of someone to blame it on. - Robert Bloch
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